Portrait of a Woman

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• cjjc_jules (3742)
• [2006-09-16 13:22]

im suprise nobody seen this wonderful composition, the title is a little bit distractive. the framing is excellent, the pov are great, the b/w added to the mood of the picture. goodwork my friend-jon

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• Ilir (5119)
• [2006-09-16 13:53]

Why in earth do you include those letters and shut down the photography? What is the point? They only distract the attention away so the phot itself turns into a secondary moment of importance. I honestly don't get it.

The photography is a marvelous, soulfull, emotionaly packed portrait, one rarely sees such a creadible display of mothers affectionate eyes, with captivating care and love for her breathren (I presume you are the son).

Come on, repost this one without a frame. It is a fantastic portrait and deserves all possible attention.

A.

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• amelie (428)
• [2006-09-17 3:30]

Çok etkileyici ve çarpıcı bir portre Deniz.O kederli bakan gözlere daldığında alıp sürüklüyor insanı...Özellikle çerçeven de harika olmuş.Annenin ellerinden öpüyorum.Senin de ellerine sağlık..

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• ixtanbul7 (4604)
• [2006-09-19 3:46]

Annen için çok özendiğn belli oluyor. Ama çalışmana da değmiş doğrusu... Çerçevedeki yerleşim alından kesim çok başarılı bence. Yazılar ve çerçeve de hoş... Eline sağlık Deniz...Işığın bol olsun... Annene uzun ve sağlıklı ömürler...

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• tracer (7920)
• [2006-09-19 9:49]

the mood is perfect, but the text is subjective to the eyes of the viewer.
for me if its not so scattered i think it would look great, but it doesnt diminish the quality of the photo.

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• fumaretue (1825)
• [2006-09-21 7:59]

I like the portrait, intersting expression... but not the letters added in the frame.

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• simonfranco (1587)
• [2006-10-09 10:38]

Fantastic portrait. great expression. nice composition. good contrast. excellent choice of b/w.

curious frame (I don't like the text though)

thanks for sharing

Simon