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curved floors
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Copyright: Elif Eren (eliferen) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 573 W: 84 N: 426] (3644)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-07-31
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture
Camera: Canon 350D (Digital Rebel XT), 18-55mm 3.5-5.6 CANON
Exposure: f/10.0, 1/25 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-09-16 4:39
Viewed: 944
Points: 34
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is one of the newest shopping centers in Istanbul named Kanyon which has an interesting architectural design.

When i took the photos there, most thing i hard to do it, adjusting the exposure. Because there were dark and light parts together. Hope the reflected glasses dont disturbing much.

PS. I really missed to be here in TL, this site has a great soul with you...friendly members...

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  • drymd29 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1447 W: 248 N: 654] (7621)
  • [2006-09-16 5:03]
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Hi Elif; nice to see again, my presence here is also irregular, it is nice to see somebody passing by who I know now for some longer time. Your picture:
I like here the watching position; on peoples head and also in front; we see them all and they do see only their nearby passengers.
You had just a small part to make the scene horizontal and it is a succes.
Good work again Elif
Huub

Merhaba Elif Hanım,
Uzun bir aradan sonra Tekrar hoşgeldiniz.
Süper bir bakış açısı, Mükemmel bir perspektif.Kompozisyon harika olmuş.Elinize, gözünüze sağlık.

İyi hafta sonları.

hAyAti

hi elif,
good to see you again with an interesting picture. great pov and composition having a nice exposure and superb sharpness. the glass reflections didn't distract at all. tfs.
jeff

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  • Tintin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2198 W: 267 N: 345] (1982)
  • [2006-09-16 8:05]
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So good to see you posting again, Elif, and I have missed your pictures. This one is very nicely composed but I might have cut a bit at the top so we would notsee the people on that other level thus keeping only 3 levels. I read somewhere that 3 elements was better than 4. For the rest, I like how you are presenting this very interesting architecture and you did well with managing the exposure. Well done!

Hi Elif, there's a great tension in this comp that I love, also the angle, well done, thanx, M, (*_*)

Şükür kavuşturana! :)Özgün,yaratıcı çalışmalarını özlemiştik. Kanyon mimari açıdan görüntülemesi zor bir mekan lakin sen gayet başarılı görüntülemişsin.Harika bir kompozisyon ve bakış açısı.Eline sağlık.

Hi Elif,
Great compo, good use of the curves ... and also reflections :)
Hope you will more often here now !
Sylvie

Hi Elif,
that's realy an interesting perspective.
Very modern architecture, I like it.
Istanbul is such a wonderful city, so many different architecture, I'm coming back sometime, bye
Sabine - wishnugaruda

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  • berek Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 690 W: 60 N: 50] (332)
  • [2006-09-17 0:46]
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Merhaba Elif,
geometri derslerine devam. çok iyi bir kadraj ve bakış acısı. ellerine sağlık. selamlar
Burak

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  • Kocak Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 41 W: 35 N: 4] (298)
  • [2006-09-17 8:41]
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Merhaba Elif,
Tekrar hoşgeldin. Kanyonda bir ara fotograf cekmenin yasak oldugunu duymustum yanlış hatırlıyorda olabilir. Gercekten guzel bir açı secmişsiniz tebrikler aramızda gormekten mutluk duydum

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 757 W: 37 N: 423] (3843)
  • [2006-09-19 1:47]

Hello Elif :) is great to see you post again my friend. Although is hard to control in terms of S. Speed & DOV. But the acheivement are quit success. Even the foreground is sharp in this dynamic curve architectural image. Looking forward for your creative work again. Take care!

Wong

Hosgeldin Elif,

Cok güzel fotograf Elif, has hat oyumrum.

Güle güle,

J.

Selam Elif,
Ne zamandır yoktun. Hoş geldin. Notu okumasam burası neresi diye soracaktım. E gitmeyince bilinmiyor tabii ki. İlgiç bir mimarisi varmış. Hani alışveriş merkezlerini sevmem ama sırf bu mimariyi görmek için gideceğim. Güzel bir kare eline sağlık...

yeşil eklendi

Hi Elif,
Great POV with the curves leading me further into the photo. The DOF in this photo is really great. I love the reflection of the glass.
TFS,
Niek

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  • ose Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 508 W: 0 N: 18] (5420)
  • [2006-10-01 20:15]

Hi Elif
Nice shot. Good composition. Good colours, sharpnes, details, DOF and POV.
well done Elif

osse

I've taken a few shots of this place myself, (From outside Starbucks looking up at the geometric patterns). However I think your shot has captured the essence of the place with the curves flowing around the central structure. Great control of the exposure with the various lighting challenges and a good shot of daily life.

Andrew.

Nice architecture. I like the reflexion, and I suppose that it was not so easy to get the best balance between light and dark parts.

TFS
:) later

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  • ARGI Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 99 W: 2 N: 40] (1139)
  • [2008-06-24 5:00]

Of course curves are the strong point of your composition.
But not only. Walking figures give life to the shot
Excellent POV.
An artistique and attractive work.
Very well done Elif
best regards Argyris

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