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• modalus (10)
• [2006-11-20 10:16]

This is a wonderful portrait of a lovely girl. although it does look a little odd with her head just resting there - some shoulders might have worked but in any case great head portrait.

s.

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• rhymea (144)
• [2006-11-20 10:26]

Merhaba Ibrahim,
lovely photo with good colours.
and very nice smile..


best


- Raima -

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• gogovertigo (144)
• [2006-11-20 10:38]

selamlar.Filtre kullandınız mı bilmiyorum ama bu küçük ve şirin kız çok canlı çıkmış.kutlarım,başarılı bir çalışma.

gogo

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• Eternity (4)
• [2006-11-20 12:28]
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Ibrahim,
The girl is lovely and the lighting is nice, but it looks really weird which just her head sitting there; maybe try another shot where you can see at least her shoulders?
Cheers,
Stephanie.

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• wayne (0)
• [2006-11-20 13:55]
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It's a beautiful portrait indeed, but I question the composition and setting. Excuse me for saying, but in truth it looks like her head is on a silver platter! Missing a body!

You should have had her put her arms up on the surface under her chin or something. It just seems akward with just a head propped up the way it is.

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• perryhooter (27565)
• [2006-11-27 11:50]
• [2] - [workshop] [compare]

Merhaba Ibrahim!

Cute little girl and portrait you took here. I have to agree with my predecessors, we are missing something here (^_^) or there is something that should not be there. Her expression is great, but the table here should not be there. I worked a little WS. But I have to wait til tomorrow, before uploading it. I hope you will find it construcive.
Cheers!
Robert

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• twin (7358)
• [2006-11-28 9:33]

very beautiful face...
great portrait ikiz...

well done...

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• Guillem69 (5)
• [2006-12-02 17:14]

Apart of comments last night about Twin and Rychousmama...this is a great portrait. I'm sure not every turkish men called Oztutar is so beast.
Thanks for share.