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sunset experiment


sunset experiment
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Copyright: guray murat (mguray) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 84 W: 13 N: 18] (2437)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-03-16
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D70s, 10.5mm Nikkor FishEye
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-03-31 2:50
Viewed: 357
Points: 12
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merhabalar güray
güzel bir çalışma olmuş eline sağlık
yılmaz

Excellent compo and POV. Superb curve of the bridge and sunset colors.

TFS,

Andreea

başdöndürücü
(yok yok kadrajından dönmedi başım güzel diye döndü:))
elinize sağlık

  • Great 
  • KrL Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 520 W: 123 N: 488] (7367)
  • [2007-03-31 3:56]

Bonjour Guray,
Très bonne idée d'avoir voulu créer un mouvement dans la continuité du ponton.

Karèle

WOW! Guray, quite dynamic. Love the 'pan' of this walkway or whatever it is. I would LOVE to walk out there, maybe even ridge a bike. I love the slant here, too. Excellent compo as you very often do. TFS.

Nice experiment! I love how you turned what could have been an ordinary shot into something really unique and eye-catching. The curve of the wooden walkway echoes the curve of the water horizon line, that runs nicely from the bottom right to the top left, creating tons of balance. Beautiful warm tones given with the use of the sunset lighting and very crisp and clear detail. Excellent clarity and I love how the small ripples and waves of the water make the smooth neat wooden planks of the walkway just pop out. Everything seems so unified, strong composition! Great point of view and extremely creative use of a fisheye lens. Most people, when using a fisheye lens, just use standard points of view or subjects to "warp" in the image. But here you used a traditional sunset and seascape (an unusual subject for a fisheye shot) and then tilted the frame heavily to get this nice result. Perhaps the left and top are slightly dark to balance with the lower right, maybe cropping just a little bit off the top and left (about 3 centimeters off) would help to create more balance. Wonderful element of the silhouetted columns of the walkway at the lower right corner. Beautiful and creative work, TFS!
-Lara

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