house

Critiques [Translate]

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• rychousmama (226)
• [2007-06-10 20:22]

Hi Atilla, really nice bold colors, contrasts, and that composition is strong and balanced. I really love how you took what could be a somewhat ordinary scene like that of some houses and made it so different and with a punch. Really wonderful balance and composition with the house roofs going across the shot at an angle, down from the top right to the lower left. Really nice use of natural lighting that creates highlights on the right hand walls of the buildings and darker tones at the left. Did you use a gradient fill of blue from the top edge? It creates a very nice effect because it gives a rich blue at the top and some bright white in the middle, so it makes the sky interesting. I wish there was a note for this. What was the lighting that day (cloudy, sunny, overcast(grey)? Are these people's homes? Really good shot though, very strong and bold, thanks for sharing!
-Lara

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• mariuca (105)
• [2007-06-11 3:54]

well done! great shot. nice details on the house, great colors. tfs

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• jonathanhart (11551)
• [2007-06-11 7:28]

hello Atilla
very nice house, good POV and framing, well composed, good saturation too, well done
regards
jo

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• broadcaster (1336)
• [2008-04-03 11:31]

Merhaba Atilla abi.
Işık çok gerçekten, ön kısımdaki yeşil ağaç yaprakları ile daha da güzel bir kompozisyon çıkarmışsınız.
Ellerinize ve gözlerinize sağlık, selamlar.

Yasin.