Burcu

Critiques [Translate]

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• jcandeli (3985)
• [2005-03-27 13:13]

Welcome to TL. Very pretty girl. The background I do not like though. Maybe something solid. Also, the blur of the hand bothers me but the composition is nice and the tilt is nice as well. Look forward to seeing more from you. JP

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• maleentjeh (66)
• [2005-03-27 13:58]
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Hi, Welcome to TL. Very nice portrait, although I have to agree that the background is screaming for attention and pushes your model away. I made a little ws just to show what it would give if you took a less screaming background.

Looking to see more from you

Marleen

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• reddevil (0)
• [2005-03-27 18:55]

Merhaba Atalay,

Very good portrait and very good(looking) model. I agree with Marleen about the background. But it's a nice piece of creative work.

Jos

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• JLJ05 (150)
• [2005-03-27 20:09]

It's a nice potrait, yes... but her arm is a little out of focus.

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• Nessuno (0)
• [2005-06-14 6:50]

Beautiful woman...

Your lighting of her face is ok, so is the pose.

There is a slight blur on the hand, in fact a bit of sharpening would do your image good. Resizing for TL means loss of detail, which can be compensated by sharpening. Also the dark shadow on the background is a bit disturbing.

But all in all it is a shot which attracts attention.

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• MLINES (8446)
• [2008-05-04 4:50]

Hi Atalay, A beauty well presented. The head on the angle adds some panash. Good work and congratulations. TFS. Murray.