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Photo Information
Copyright: atalay karacaorenli (erguvan) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 93 W: 0 N: 8] (635)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-12-25
Categories: Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-10-04 1:20
Viewed: 551
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 17
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To cknara: thankserguvan 1 10-11 02:22
To sorin_m: thankserguvan 1 10-11 02:21
To lavan: thankserguvan 1 10-11 02:20
To ayniLL: tesekkürler.erguvan 1 10-11 02:19
To ebrusal: Tesekkürler.erguvan 1 10-11 02:18
To jacobo: THANKSerguvan 1 10-11 02:17
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Beautiful!!..
I like the golden glow of the hair and the contrast colours of the overcoat & neck tie.

nice portrait, great natural light on her hair.
but why the lack of sharpness on her face ? is it intentional done on ppwork ?
stil pleasant to look at.
thank you.
sorin

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 695 W: 2 N: 126] (3446)
  • [2007-10-04 3:48]
  • [+]

Nice capture.. Nice Colors...
TFS
regards,
lavansj

modeliniz fransız film karelerinden bir sahneyi oynuyor gibi
kendisi de güzel, beden dili ile hareket kattıgı fotograf ta:)
elinize sağlık

gerçektende bir fil karesei gibi-modeli de fotoğrafcıyıda kutuyorum.başarılar

No sé si me gusta ese desenfoque en la cara!.
Saludos
Jacobo

Anjhello Scoring System:
DOF - 3 POV - 3 CREATIVITY - 3 COMPOSITION - 3
LIGHTING - 3 SHARPNESS - 3 COLORS - 3

Average: 3.00

Range:
1 point: Average < 1.99
2 points: Average > 2.00

Scoring System:
1 Good 2 Better 3 Best

tfs!

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  • Blish Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 2 N: 2] (232)
  • [2007-11-24 9:42]

Beautiful, I'd LOVE to capture images with this much vibrancy!
Well Done!!!

A lovely light Atalay and very good focus on the body. I would have preferred to see that same focus and sharpness on the face, after all the model is very attractive. TFS,
David

Many thanks for your comment on ‘Fire – Swirling Clouds’

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