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Beyaz cicekler


Beyaz cicekler
Photo Information
Copyright: Furkan Keser (Fur_kes) (8)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-28
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/4.6, 1/250 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-07-03 10:33
Viewed: 161
Points: 6
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  • Great 
  • beyza Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 41 W: 0 N: 11] (156)
  • [2008-07-03 10:49]

Merhaba Furkan;
Treklens'e hoşgeldin.
Çiçeğin görüntüsü çok net sanki canlı gibi.

Haktan...

  • Needs Improvement 
  • kaleh Silver Star Critiquer [C: 13 W: 0 N: 4] (411)
  • [2008-07-03 11:38]

Ah... nice object but unfortunately the picture isn't sharp. It's nice attempt to make a macrophotography but you took too small "f" value so it was hard to get good sharpness depth and colours (look at the whit petals - some of them are too bright).

It's good start but I will give you some hints:
Try to use tripod - it's very useful to make some macro pictures.
Try to use larger "f" value to get full object sharp.

Good luck!

  • Great 
  • sbilgi Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 344 W: 47 N: 26] (4715)
  • [2008-07-03 13:51]

Hoşgeldin Furkan.
Başarılı çalışmalar bekliyorum.

Babana selam.
Şeref

  • Great 
  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2059 W: 375 N: 2222] (22342)
  • [2008-07-04 2:44]

Merhaba Furkan...
İlk başlangıç için fena sayılmaz...
ilerde babanı ve bizleri geçeceğinden eminim,
bunu hissediyorum...
yeterki iste ve gör...
gerisi gelir...
selamlar

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