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• pushpinder (876)
• [2008-09-12 7:55]
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cengiz,
welcome to TL...
very nice subject, first up.
I personally would have liked a wider view.
A slight under exposure would have put the anglers in silhouettes .....would have enhanced the pic, imo.
The colors seem just a little unnatural...what pp have you done?

Also, a little note with the pic is a good idea...gives the viewer an insight into the photogs mind.

Waiting to see more pics from you.

rgds

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• mcnk (741)
• [2008-09-12 8:25]
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This is a beatiful shot and a fine debut to TL.
It has a beautiful stillness mixed with avid anticipation of 'a bite'.
A great first posting. Welcome to TL. Hope many more bites come your way!
Mike

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• yetis_bey (534)
• [2008-09-12 10:26]
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iyi akşamlar cengiz başarılı
bir gün batımı çalışması
hikmet

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• trekks (13633)
• [2008-09-13 2:22]
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hi Cengiz

Welcome to TL community and your 1st post entry here shows a promising sunset shot that you have captured through a good POV.

Using the fishing rods and anglers as silhouette for your FG, especially the casual directions of rods and people standing around. The sun and its position is captured at a good moment.

Comments on your post
.a pity no Note was written
.avoid crop of man at left and rods (use wider angle)

tfs, bill