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Song of countryside


Song of countryside
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Copyright: necla erikci (ayse51) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1683 W: 124 N: 1437] (20268)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-11-15
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-03-11 13:53
Viewed: 271
Points: 50
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Eymir Lake in Ankara.

KIR ŞARKISI

Tam otların sarardığı zamanlar
Yere yüzükoyun uzanıyorum
Toprakta bir telâş, bir telâş
Karıncalar ötedenberi dostum.

Ellerime hanım böcekleri konuyor
Ne şeker şey onlar!
Uç böcek, uç böcek diyorum
Uçuyorlar

Pan'ın teneffüsü bile
Ilık, okşamakta yüzü.
Devedikenleri, çalılık vesâire
Bir âlem bu toprakların üstü.

Tabiatla haşır neşir
Kırlarda geçen ikindi vakti.
Sakin, dinlenmiş, rahat
Bir gün daha bitti.

BEHÇET NECATİGİL

Fortuna, milas, burak28, gnada, fazendeiro, Dot, boreocypriensis, chrisJ, azaf1, norenastramus, mbrito, jusninasirun has marked this note useful
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Hello my dear friend Necla,

Excellent POV, beautiful place, wonderful colors!
Very well done and framed!
Congratulations and TFS.
Sergio

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2720 W: 405 N: 2973] (32715)
  • [2009-03-11 14:28]

Merhaba Necla hanım...
şiir insanı kırlara atası geliyor, aslında hergün kırlarda sayılırız, ne doydum,ne bıktım...meslek olarak bina içinde bir memur olsaydım ne yapardım diye hep düşünürüm...
harika bir konpozisyon ve şiir...eline sağlık...selamlar

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1005 W: 81 N: 66] (12152)
  • [2009-03-11 18:53]

dear Necla,
a clear autumnal view,
too clear to visible air really makes this view.
the sky,the lake water and the trees are fixed by this air, quite like a glass work.
and of course the air is singing a song for our inner cleanliness.
its voice is like a angel in the air.
thank you,
Akihisa

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  • soe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 402 W: 0 N: 107] (2461)
  • [2009-03-11 20:17]

Hi Necla
Great shot of landscape with color and nice framed.
Tin Soe

Hello Necla.
looks to be a very nice picknick place, right ?
Good picture it is.
Jan

Merhaba Necla!
Beautiful place,wonderful warm colors! perfect lighting!
TFS Selamlar
Kostas

Merhaba Necla Teyze
Ne kadar güzel bir yer
Ben Eymir Gölünü görmedim
Şiir de harika
Teşekkürler
Burak

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2662 W: 74 N: 4763] (21685)
  • [2009-03-12 6:38]

Hi Necla...

Excellent photo with beautiful view - nice poem..!
Wonderful shot, sharpness and colors,
perfect details and well composed...
Best regards,
George

Merhaba Necla:)
Very beautiful photo.
Beautiful composition,great tone of colours and sharpness.
Wanderful Point of view and details.
Best regards
Mitko:)

Hi Necla

Wonderful capture.Great POV composition,lovely colours and details.Thanks.

Friendly greetings

José Diogo

çok güzel bir yer ve dengeli renkleri ve netligiyle basarili bir fotograf!
merci!
ömer

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1397 W: 31 N: 3045] (12300)
  • [2009-03-12 15:24]

Ni Necla
I don't know why there are so many pillows resting on the ground. This place looks beautiful and calm enough and would make a great relaxation spot.
Well taken shot
Dot

Merhaba Necla Hanım, harika bir dinlenme yeri. Eymir gölünden etkileyici bir enstantane.
Elinize sağlık.
Bayram

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  • jazrr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 317 W: 72 N: 82] (1883)
  • [2009-03-12 22:10]

Hi Necla:

Beautiful place.
What are the pillows for?
Wonderful colors and POV.
A nice place for relaxation and picnic.

Regards,
Jafar

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4220 W: 414 N: 6630] (42005)
  • [2009-03-13 0:40]

Merhaba necla

Good repetition of the pillows with excellent sharpness colour saturationm, & good reflections in the lake. Have a great weekend!

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1299 W: 2 N: 202] (15592)
  • [2009-03-13 2:54]

mooie omgeving om te verpozen!
beautiful surroundings to repose

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 740 W: 61 N: 1255] (6932)
  • [2009-03-13 3:30]

Good morning Necla Hn

Absolutely beautiful plave by the lake. Serene and tranquil it appears to be the ideal place for a day out. When the weather is warmer it must really great.

Have a good weekend and TFS
Argiris

HI Necla...nice shot...peaceful scene well composed.

Roger

Merhaba Necla, splendid view of lovely place with fantastic colors, very well done, have a good week end, ciao Silvio

Great shot of landscape with color and nice framed.

dear Necla
wonderful view.
I'm curious about the items on the lake's bank.
beautiful colors.
looks like a pleasant and peaceful place.
it's a pity there is no English translation of the poem.
best regards
tsilla

merhaba necla
eymire bahar gelmiş,kadraj ve renk tonları çok güzel
olmuş.Ellerine saglık.
Selamlar
H.Ayhan

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1626 W: 118 N: 2805] (11304)
  • [2009-03-17 10:36]

Hello Necla
Fantastic sharp and vivid colours, great light capture, and a very well done composition. I love the simphony of nature colours you catured here. Great mood.
Best regards, mb

very beautiful shot, well composed and the title rings in this shots, melodies of colors so detailed, the twigs the water and the sky very well placed in your shot

tfs
cris(",)

Hi Necla,

The song must be beautiful complemented well with this gorgeous image. Amazing perspective in brilliant composition.

TFS and best regards,
Jusni

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