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Olympic
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Copyright: mahmut nuri (nuria) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 13 W: 0 N: 0] (216)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-08-26
Camera: Nikon D-70s, 18-70 Nikkor DX
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/755 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-09-10 9:01
Viewed: 601
Points: 8
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Hey. Very nice shot. I like the sharpness of action. Your bckgrd is very nice too.
Congrats.
denis

Very nice action shot - congrats. A little note about it would be nice though.

Nice picture !!!
A little note about it would be nice though.
Antonio

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  • kateb Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 514 W: 153 N: 338] (2991)
  • [2005-09-10 11:06]

Nice action shot, I like the way you have used the fast exposure to freeze the moment. The photo is well balanced, and the only thing I'd suggest to improve on it is if you could have taken it from a slightly lower camera position so that the jumping person would appear more above the horizon. Nice photo.

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  • tsumeb Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 308 W: 58 N: 269] (2128)
  • [2005-09-10 15:23]

Really fine photo Mahmut. The action is frozen perfectly. I love this picture!

Very good idea and nice projection of it. But for me we have here 2 flaws: too short shutter time - I'd double it at least twice. I can't see movement of the boy though I expected it! Also: tighter crop would add a lot to the picture - the boy would be more important in it, occupying much significant area of the picture. Also frames are in excess here - they detract my attention from the boy.

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