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Copyright: Elif Eren (eliferen) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 573 W: 84 N: 426] (3644)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-11-29
Categories: Artwork, Experimental, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Exposure: f/5.6, 30 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-12-10 9:52
Viewed: 789
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 38
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
* This object is a base of a candle. I like the spiral part of it :)
* This is combined of 4 different shots.
* Taken on white background, under direct sunlight. So here you see the natural shadows with the object itself.
* I clipped the object with shadow, place them giving the 4 layers %90 opacity.
* Put a white layer at back, added frame.

Hope you like it...:)

Victor, Tintin, Guntram, mwebr, wishnugaruda, clix_stuff, metall, wck, jrendeiro has marked this note useful
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To Photograph2u: Hi Yaneliferen 1 12-19 11:49
To jrendeiro: Hi Joséeliferen 1 12-16 02:23
To Maru: Hi Marisaeliferen 2 12-14 04:54
To wck: Hi Wongeliferen 2 12-13 20:02
To wallie: Hi Doneliferen 1 12-13 14:57
To cloverstar: Hi Dianaeliferen 1 12-13 09:42
To paul_indigo: Thank you Pauleliferen 1 12-13 03:35
To vinicio: thank you Vinicioeliferen 1 12-13 03:31
To Savignole: Hi Martineeliferen 1 12-13 03:12
To Werewolf: Hi Werewolfeliferen 2 12-11 22:39
To Yug: Hi Guyeliferen 1 12-11 15:09
To metall: Mehdi!!!eliferen 1 12-11 14:53
To Anutka: Hi Anna!!!eliferen 1 12-11 14:47
To Plant: Hi Pauleliferen 1 12-11 14:38
To clix_stuff: Hi Lakshimieliferen 1 12-11 14:29
To btokaz: Hi Tomaszeliferen 1 12-11 14:27
To brettf1: Hi Kevin..eliferen 1 12-11 14:25
To wishnugaruda: Sabine..eliferen 1 12-11 14:19
To Guntram: Hi Guntrameliferen 1 12-11 14:16
To iso: Merci Micheleliferen 1 12-11 14:08
To Tintin: Hi Suzanne..eliferen 1 12-11 14:07
To Victor: Hi Victor..eliferen 1 12-11 14:02
To stecotdon: Hi Stef!eliferen 1 12-11 13:59
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Critiques [Translate]

Beautiful geometry Elif. Nice soft colours and very interating effects.
Very well done!

take care, Stef :))

Wow...Hard work but, nice good result Elif, well done.
Best regards,
Victor

Very nice graphical pictures, Elif, almost B&W. My favourites are the top two as the light seems better on them. The one at the bottom left seems to have too much light on it and lose some of its definition. I also think that your crop is a bit tight on the right bottom as we are missing only a tiny bit of the circle; I think it would be best either to show it in full or to crop a bit more. But those are very nit-picky stuff (you know me!!!) and the concept is great & I just love the twisted shadows. Well done!

  • Great 
  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1119 W: 62 N: 167] (27941)
  • [2005-12-10 10:21]
  • [+]

Very nice shot Elif, it's well done, original good idea, real nice search.

Oh, this is very creative again ... an "elegant" composition, a perfectly balanced "chaos" of lines, the shadows almost melting with the lines of the object. Great work again!
Greetings
Guntram

Booaahh! That's magnifique!
I love the twirls with their shadows, together they are realy hypnotising! Round and round and round - help, my head is swimming!!!
Excellent idea and quality, good work, thanks and greetings
Sabine - wishnugaruda

Oh Elif!

Great hypnotizing graphical image. Your skill with post processing really shows here. Excellent work! Great idea and wonderfully presented. I really like the whites and grays. TFS
Kevin

Absolutely perfect Elif. Great idea and wonderful graphical effect...
Tomasz

Superb shot Elif, Good idea as well as realisation. The result is excellent. TFS

Elif, not much to say other than I love it and have added it to my favourites. Great working of a simple subject. Regards, Paul.

Wow, piece of art. Simple and clever idea. I like it very much.
Anna

ELIF, You must be proud of this shot!

PERFECT!

Wow! I like that! I did something in that style with a ramp detail but never post it. The finition is not to my taste like yours... It was an experience... They don't give always satisfaction! Tou massive... An object like yours is better... and i like the shadow completion!

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  • Yug Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 168 W: 0 N: 89] (1864)
  • [2005-12-11 10:01]
  • [+]

Beautiful and very creative.
Guy

Excellent Elif, aesthetic and graphic collage with an interesting effect. I like your experimentations, you're very creative :)
Maritne

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 757 W: 37 N: 423] (3843)
  • [2005-12-11 20:43]
  • [+]

Very well done Elif, For me spiral is a mistery object. You did well to present it here in different angle & form in a square frame. & the shad is creating an illusion of dept! Great job my friend!

Wong

Beautiful work, my compliments.
Ciao
Vinicio

Clever and creative.

Very creative idea to make layers and blend them together. Great subject and lighting. My only suggestion, and this is purely my own taste, would be to add more contrast to bring out the difference between the lighter and darker areas. I did a workshop to explain.
Sorry I have no points left.

Elif, it's a beautiful and aesthetic astract! I like the way you combined them to create a different vision and space.
I made a smal ws for you, but just to play a bit (hope you don't mind!)
Well done!
Marisa

Good composition here, Elif. You played well here with the candle and the shadows. I like it and TFS.

I'm out of smilies, so points next time.

Best regards,

Don

Hi Elif,
Beautifull shot where light and shadows makes the composition.
Well done,
José

Hello Elif, this is a great circles study with repetitions in the shadows. I like the low key tone photo here. Very well done. Makes the silver stand out from the white.

Tfs and have a great day! Yan :)

p.s., sorry, out of greens

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