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• cjjc_jules (3742)
• [2006-10-03 10:35]

Allen, the model projection, the soft tone the sharpness on the eye are all ok. here my point of view. the cropping of head are very bad. the direct light on her shoulder is also a little bit distracting. but from this Portrait series that you done with this model this one is i like most. tfs-jon

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• gmonkeh (448)
• [2006-10-04 0:50]

I actually disagree with Jon on this one. you look at the "fashion" or men's magazines like Maxim or Stuff. You will see a fair share of models cropped in this manner. I think done the right way like you have here it could be very effective.

The only nitpick I would have is that it's a little underexposed. Nothing a little curves adjustment wouldnt fix though.

Great shot Allen.

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• mahryska (54)
• [2006-10-05 6:54]

this is a fantastic shot. i love her expression. the eyes are amazingly captured here...love the color too! and her pose?! wow! inviting. galeng man!! =D

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• qadirsh (89)
• [2006-10-19 23:15]

I agree withgmonkeh's critique. It is a fascinating shot.