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JeyKyu


JeyKyu
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Copyright: Allen Erestain (niatsere) (287)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-03-16
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D70s, Nikon 24-120/3.5-5.6 ED VR
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-03-17 3:41
Viewed: 457
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken during our recent photoshoot last weekend. Side lighting and reflector on the other end.
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Hi Allen
You're enjoying the challenges of portraiture, I see! Bravo. :)
I like your composition here, the placement of your subject towards the right of the frame, and the inclusion of one shoulder only, makes an interesting and pleasing setup.
Your model is very pretty and it's a lovely smile!
The light is very dramatic - and strong, next time it might be better if you position the reflector differently to soften the shadows on her face. The main issue is that we can't see her eye(s) clearly, and they are key to making a connection between subject and viewer.
Thanks for sharing, I hope there'll be more!
Rew

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