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Lady in Pink
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I was taking a series of shot of the plants which shown blurred in the foreground, when this lady suddenly appeared from far...and with no hesitation I redirected the camera to her and put the focus on her and the lonely bird which is in the floor....
I am using a 24-70 mm lens at the moment and this is the maximum that i can get.... |
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- japiey
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(8932) - [2007-10-08 11:28]
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Hi Alex.
Good composition, and lovely....
Salutes.
jean paul
Hi Alex,
nice try, but I don't like few things here. First of all placement of the woman. Central placement focuses the viewer on the central spot making the rest irrelevant. You have here nice surrounding which would make good composition if the woman was placed differently. I made workshop correcting this plus few other things like levels, saturatin and contrast. Also sharpened it a bit. I wonder if you like my solution *s* tfs
Marek
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