Art & Light

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• cokutan (268)
• [2007-10-08 12:27]
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Noel,
great POV and composition !
The format/shape helps it too.

Well done.
Best regards, Behram...

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• pemi71 (2617)
• [2007-10-08 13:08]
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Hello Noel ,
...great shot with very nice lighting control and nice tone colors, you play with the shadow and lighting very well here.
the models expression and pose look very great and sexy, tfs...

Petar

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• eMBeer (1420)
• [2007-10-08 13:56]
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Hi Noel,

I like your idea, I like the composition - it makes the photo very elegant and clear. But there is imo one serious issue: you created inconsistent light on her back. On one hand there is very well defined left arm around the elbow, on the other the rest of her back blends with the bg. This creates discomfort for the viewer. The choices are two: or additional touch of light on her back to create slightly visible contour of her body, or completely hidden left arm. This is how I see it. tfs

Marek

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• rewshearer (20718)
• [2007-10-08 14:42]
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Very nice work, I like the light and shadow. Your note doesn't mention PP work but it appears you applied some blur as well?

Nice job
Rew

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• Refugee (25532)
• [2007-10-09 2:21]
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AH but Marek, the light has hit the arm and not the rest of her back. Excellent Noel, something a little different from you. Nicely comverted and displayed. TFS,
David

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• vsinopoulos (13115)
• [2007-10-09 8:54]
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HI Noel,

Welcome back my friend, its nice to see your new work! Very impressive portrait, with a masterful play of light and shadow.
Well composed, very sharp and well presented.
TFS,
Vassilis

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• harpya (9527)
• [2007-10-09 9:35]
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Hello Noel

Great shot and beautiful composition
I adore pictures in B/W, they are fine and classic!
And you worked very well here.
Beautiful model
Congratulations

Sérgio

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• perryhooter (27341)
• [2007-10-10 10:11]
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Hello Noel!

You choose an eye-catching post for your return on TL. Welcome back. I missed your previous posts !Minimalist composition bur lovely light study of a classy lady.

Great to see you back. Looking forward discovering your works again!
Robert

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• vandana2923 (22207)
• [2007-10-14 23:52]
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Good bw colours and details, a superb PoV and a wonderful posting TFS
Vandana

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• Claudine (0)
• [2007-10-16 6:30]
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Hello Noel,
I like this picture for this original lightning and beautiful composition. Even if it is almost a silhouette, we can see nice details and catch light. This is a sophisticated picture. Thanks!
Claudine

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• Janice (32968)
• [2007-10-23 2:51]
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Hi Noel, this looks good. I know nothing about how to place models for photos, but whatever you did here, I like it.
BRAVO!
Janice