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Trina in the Beach


Trina in the Beach
Photo Information
Copyright: Tinayums Bernice (Tinayums) (144)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-12-07
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 400D/Rebel XTi
Exposure: f/11, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-12-08 9:16
Viewed: 687
Points: 15
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
One fun day with my co-fotogs and our model..Trina. It was a blast!

I realized that early morning (sunrise) is still the best available light we can use for outdoors. Added extra time for more shots is just a plus.. other than sunset..

My experimental shot trying a new lens.. 28-300mm.. My first time using RAW file.

PP work- a little crop on the right below edge coz red color (rose petals) was visible. Took the color as shot.. sharpen and resize for posting.

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To machinelove: hi vincent!Tinayums 1 12-12 02:51
To guinness_fr: hi olivier!Tinayums 1 12-12 02:50
To ceslou: hi sir rocky!Tinayums 1 12-09 10:10
To japat: thanks!Tinayums 1 12-09 01:13
To japiey: good to hear from you..!Tinayums 1 12-09 01:12
To rewshearer: hi tito!Tinayums 1 12-09 01:10
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  • Good 
  • Roly Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 182 W: 4 N: 60] (555)
  • [2007-12-08 9:33]
  • [+]

The angle really doesn't cut it for me. First of all, it places the model at a weird angle, and then that boat coming down kills what's left of the image. Aside from this, it is rather good, technically sound and with an appealing pose from the model. It features a classic dress, a classic smile and a classic pose, even a classic bunch of roses. It all works beautifully together, but trying to put a funky twist to it by tilting the horizon does not work.

Ang lupit ...Galing... Tfs

Very striking tilt, it's certainly bold - I like it.
The light works well, the pose is good, and the boat racing past in the background is just a bonus.
This is a good shot!
Rew

Hi Tinayums,

BOLD AND BEAUTIFULL!!!!
Excellent shot.
The tilt is lovely.

Namasthe..

jean paul

  • Great 
  • japat Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 0 N: 9] (1307)
  • [2007-12-08 11:19]
  • [+]

MABUHAY KA!!MAHUSAY KA BRO!

JAPS

Galeng naman nito. Kailan shoot natin?

Hello Tynayums

nice shot, a good compostion with a nice.

too bad for that boat that disturb a bit

TFS anyway

Olivier

Great shot Tinayums,
The lines and diagonal work well for me,
gives the shot an extra excitement.
Lovely model and scenery,
overall really great.
thanks, Vincent

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