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Desert Fashion


Desert Fashion
Photo Information
Copyright: Ruben Mirabel (venz_dt) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 115 W: 2 N: 6] (826)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-12-19
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D70s, NIKON AF-S 18-200mm 1:3.5-5.6G ED VR
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-12-23 4:43
Viewed: 1506
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
PP Done:

Shoot in Raw and manipulate the color in Photoshop
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To rewshearer: Thank youvenz_dt 1 12-23 23:06
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Hi Ruben!
Amazing girl. Amazing pose. Nice colors. Original take. Cheers!

เขียนจากขวาไปซ้าย มีอักษรพื้นฐาน.
ตัว การปรับไปเขียนภาษาอื่น เช่น ภาษาเปอร์เซียและ..
ภาษาอูรดูจะเพิ่มอักษรอื่นเข้ามา ไม่มีความแตกต่างระหว่างตัวพิมพ์กับตัวเขียนและตัวเล็กกับตัวใหญ่ อักษรแต่ละตัวจะเขียนติดกับอักษรตัวอื่นแม้ในการพิมพ์และรูปอักษรเปลี่ยนไปขึ้นกับตำแหน่งในคำ...

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2027 W: 147 N: 3408] (13641)
  • [2007-12-23 5:10]
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Very nice portrait shot, Ruben, of a pretty model and in a good BG. I find it distracting that you have positioned the slope line of sand dune to cut through her face, which really spoils this image which could be sharper. But your level of shot is just good from this height. TFS

wonderfull capture, nice sharpnnes and color

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 534 W: 23 N: 1875] (11382)
  • [2007-12-23 8:49]
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Hi Ruben,
This is a wonderful portrait of a wonderful woman!
Greetings from Holland,
Adri

This is a good one, especially as it must have been under difficult circumstances. Hot (she does look as if she's feeling the heat) and dusty?
Pose is ok although a little contrived, it doesn't seem so natural - but certainly strong. The colours work well throughout the shot and the placement or angle of horizon doesn't bother me. I'm not so keen on the bright patch on her chest where the sunlight has hit, but it's not a major issue, and you've used flash well to balance the light.
Well done
Rew

Very good picture. Beautiful portrait.
Regards.

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