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COLORS II


COLORS II
Photo Information
Copyright: Jowel Putian (jowhitee) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 299 W: 68 N: 274] (2622)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03-23
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Canon 40D, Sigma 18-200mm f3.5-6.3 DC OS HSM, Sigma 72mm UV
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/640 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-05-09 7:26
Viewed: 304
Points: 36
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another partial view of the Children's Building.

Situated at Creekside Park, this structure is an educational centre for children where they can investigate, explore, play, discover, and learn about the world where we live in.

pp talk:
adjusted levels and saturation
aligned horizontally
resized for TL
added frame

thanks for viewing! ciao!

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Hi Jowel,

Yes, perfect job here. Colours are very strong and the composition makes a very abstract shot.

TFS!
Darlene

the composition with lines and colors are just perfect!

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  • Romeu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 288 W: 0 N: 154] (1405)
  • [2008-05-09 7:39]

Hello Jowel,

Great colors and composition.

Adastro

Hello Jowel :o)

Excellent ! I really love this kind of composition. Vivid colours and very graphic shot, all my compliments :)
Have a nice day

Marylou ;)

Hi, really nice graphic composition and contrast of bright colors and the diagonal from the stairs

rgds
Allen

Whoa! This stopped me in my tracks going through the gallery! Excellent shot, with eye-catching colors and interesting features in a well-managed composition. Good light, crisp focus, fun subject and details. Super!

hello!
good composition with strong colours! maybe too strong but I like it!

cheers!
artur

Excellent colors and geometry....

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  • mcoco Gold Star Critiquer [C: 64 W: 0 N: 1] (592)
  • [2008-05-09 12:35]

Hi Jowel,

Do you know Mondriaan?
Your picture reminds me of his art.

Well done.

TFS
Marco

Very nice work Jowel, super geometry and beautifully measured composition. Everything is perfectly placed.
Rew

Hi Jowel,

What vibrant colors for a children's building! I love how the stairway leads up to the door! Very nice modern art!

nice capture! love the symmetry and the vibrant colours. i reminds me of this scene from the last part of the movie "The Truman Show" TFS!

Amazing colours indeed.
I like the lines and contours of the stairs, little square windows, all nicely and evenly lined up.

TFS
Tom

the colors are well captured..good job!!

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1186 W: 285 N: 1315] (7065)
  • [2008-05-12 14:48]

Hello Jowel.
Good looking fresh colors on the building. I wish more buildings will get similar colors in the future. Life will be better.
Nice presentation and well capture.
My compliments.
Janek Kloss

Hi Jowel,
Another impressive photo from you.
*composition, very good...
*subject, impressive...
*saturate, nice...
*colors balance, good...
*sharpen and contrast, good...
Very good sight. Finally, good capture.
Congratulations
TFS
Respectfully...

ergUn
:) tomorrow

Hi Jowel,
Very interesting, eye catching building
Great bright colors. I love the stairs going through the shot.
well done,
Shelby

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  • limba3 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1107 W: 428 N: 391] (10617)
  • [2008-08-03 9:28]

Hi Jowel
Superb, colorful and elegant composition... Love it! TFS,
Anna

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