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THE SPRITUAL COLOUR


THE SPRITUAL COLOUR
Photo Information
Copyright: ANJINI LAITU (laituap) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 97 W: 0 N: 5] (1107)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-11-24
Categories: Portrait
Camera: NIKON D 200, NIKKOR VR 70-200 MM f/2.8 G IF-ED
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/800 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-07-14 7:46
Viewed: 231
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
THIS I SHOT DURING MY TRIP TO VRINDABAN-INDIA SOME TIME BACK.
I WAS FACINATED BY THE SAFFRON COLOUR OF THE HOLIMAN.
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Bonjour Angini
A very nice portrait; good pov, beautiful colours ; seems a little pale for me; I try a ws
Have a nice day

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 527 W: 1 N: 736] (3598)
  • [2009-07-14 11:46]
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Hi Anjini,
Great portrait shot of this holy man but it looks as thought you have a lot of noise around on his skin tones, although Clovert did improve this somewhat on his WS the orange of his robes came out too bright. You might be able to improve if you desaturate or turn to greyscale and adjust your contrast and brightness. This might give him a bit more character in his face. Great catch anyway. TFS
Bri

Did you drop your camera into the washing machine?...)))
Content and composition is good. But the shot is very much OVER exposed, the colors are wash out, image foggy and noisy. Not much worth salvation here. First thing first, try to have some control over exposure.

Hi, Anjini. Nice to hear from you. I tried to improve this overexposed image of a great subject. Please look at the workshop. The choice of the subject and expression of the holy man was good.Cheers.

Hello Anjini, please see a what a few tweaks can do... click on the workshop section.

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