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• peter1892 (32)
• [2005-08-28 5:56]

Dreamy...yes it has some of that 'first light of day' quality! These photos are forming a nice theme...

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• tsumeb (2109)
• [2005-08-28 16:23]
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Very dreamy and a really fine composition Mariyah. The red accent adds just the right touch. Perhaps you could have let some of the darks get darker . . . but a great photo nevertheless. I tried a workshop just for fun. I hope you find it interesting.

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• Peeotr (2277)
• [2005-08-30 17:59]

A pity the text you added doesn't fit the mood of your photo. What I like in it - is calm, without looking for a something great.

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• shahx (654)
• [2005-12-10 9:17]

Very nice,
Looks like a novel cover to me.
Good one. Hey mariyah, you are in love with portraits.

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• zchizzerz (6903)
• [2006-05-03 6:57]
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hi mariyah,
i prefer this morning shot rather than the similar pic with a patterned attire. the colors works well and the red pillow emphasized that you just got out of bed (awakened in a dream perhaps). imho, the top portion of the image should be cropped. tfs.
jeff

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• rewshearer (19052)
• [2006-06-21 5:36]

A nice intimate mood to this, and as has been pointed out already, a real 'morning' feel to it, thanks to that strong light coming in through the window.
I would agree that it could be cropped at the top; otherwise, lovely work.