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Ahmed


Ahmed
Photo Information
Copyright: Michael Fleischmann (michaelf) (255)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-12
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon Rebel EOS 300D, Canon EF 28-105/ f 4-5,6
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Portraits [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-10-16 3:14
Viewed: 732
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Ahmed, our boat driver through the "Hara" mangrove forest in the north of the island of Qeshm.

Have a look:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hara_forests
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  • Great 
  • niraj Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 183 W: 3 N: 96] (2042)
  • [2007-10-16 4:14]

Hello Micheal,
I like the natural lighting on the face that still maintains texture and the varying color. The fact that the background is much lighter makes the face a good focal point. I think it looks different and looks good.

  • Great 
  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1489 W: 23 N: 0] (11796)
  • [2007-10-16 4:40]

Hi
very good portrait...

  • Great 
  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 695 W: 2 N: 126] (3446)
  • [2007-10-16 5:04]

nice portrait
good expression
tfs
regards
lavansj

Hello Michael,

Nice portrait. TFS.
Imho, you should increase brightness on his face.
I am posting a WS photo with some adjustments and hope you will like it.

best regards.

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