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Gone Swimming


Gone Swimming
Photo Information
Copyright: Marija Gencic (Maria74) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 551 W: 90 N: 630] (5997)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-07-30
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/2.5, 1/50 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-08-12 11:44
Viewed: 1011
Points: 32
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
More serious of pictures of ships and ancient sites coming soon...today, a photo taken while having a walk along the beach in Marmaris one evening. Marmaris is a specific place, in the evenings there is always a haze above the sea and the surrounding mountains. I decided to leave the picture as it is - autoleves made the background too light. Just slight crop on the left, thin frame and resizing.
Have a great weekend everyone!
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To clix_stuff: Hi Lakshmi!Maria74 3 08-14 13:22
To Televana: ThanxMaria74 1 08-14 07:26
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Hi Marija.
Great title for a very intersting shot. excellent DOF and so is the sharpness... The orange clothes on the bike add the color touch that is very useful.. TFS
Denis.

Very unique POV of the bicycle Marija! Good composition as well, very well done!
Gabriella

very nice composition and POV
good sharpness as well Marija :)

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  • Tintin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2198 W: 267 N: 345] (1982)
  • [2005-08-12 13:07]

This is just beautifully done, Marija! You are truly a great photographer that can see beauty wherever you go. The composition is wonderful with good sharpness as well as giving a great mood of vacation & relaxation. Like Denis, I think that the orange sweater adds a very nice touch of colour in this predominently blue/gray photo.

I think you made the right decision not to touch the haze as it goes well with this picture. Excellent!

P.S. Love the title!!!

Good subject to shoot. Perhaps a little more space on the left in the composition, which also would place the bike off centre a bit more. Nice choice of a vertical crop. Overall, I think the image could do with some curves lightening.

Unique POV of bike. Well done.

Hi Marija, very nice shot, I like how you present us a simple subject with a very good point of view and composition. Regards, Iris

Hi Maria,
Another nice daily life shot. Nice POV, composition and colours.
I did a workshop, not as an improvement. Just for a different look.
-Regards
Lakshmi

This is an interesting combination. and I like the shoes patiently waiting for their owner. Good dof while retaining the mountains in the background.

Nice use of the telephoto and good composition. The pair of shoes adds a lot to the shot. Good light. I like the orange shirt on the blue background. Excellent!

Hi Marija,
very intersting shot. nice idea and very catchy title. I love teh shoes and shirt left behind. Really gives impresson of just a quuick swim ;)

Well done!

take care, Stef

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  • amm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 227 W: 29 N: 86] (634)
  • [2005-08-19 15:17]

Quelle ambiance dans cette photo! La différence de netteté entre les 2 plans invite à l'imagination ...
Congratulations.
amm

Nice shot good POV
great idea for a title
Love the old style bicycle
like beach and seaside shots
TFS
Dave R

How come I've missed this one?!?!? Excellent shot with strong composition and coloful details.
Great work Mare, svaka čast!

Petko

Hi there Gencic ..van Aarle here (^_^)
This is the way to open the heart of a Dutch photographer! Bicycle on the shore
( we say; Fiets ) Well done and points later.
Greetzz from Holland
John

here it's my country.. :) and the excellent expression.

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