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Beach Minimalism


Beach Minimalism
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Copyright: Marija Gencic (Maria74) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 551 W: 90 N: 630] (5997)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-07
Categories: Nature, Abstract
Camera: Sony DSC F828 Cybershot
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): _Fotos adicionadas por 5 ou mais membros [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-12-27 9:01
Viewed: 1501
Favorites: 5 [view]
Points: 96
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Marmaris, Turkey.

I don't know why I kept coming back to this shot again and again. The title is totally uninspirative I guess, but whichever came to my mind seemed to clash with the simplicity I wanted to keep.
PP work: none except for the cropping the plant on the right and sky in the upper part.
Have a great day everyone.
P.S. I apologize in advance for probably choosing a wrong state in Turkey, but I couldn't find to which one the city of Marmaris belonged.

chiaraluna, JohnTulip, pablominto, Beger, chrisJ, perryhooter, harpya, jrendeiro, btokaz, Biance-, saggitario has marked this note useful
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To kedo: hi mariakedo 1 03-30 06:06
To kedo: Hi!Maria74 1 03-21 16:10
To mukesh: Hi MukeshMaria74 1 02-07 11:42
To ballyna: Hi NejatMaria74 2 01-16 09:03
To chrisJ: Thank you:)Maria74 1 12-31 06:44
To letr: Dear LeonMaria74 1 12-31 04:52
To metall: Hi MehdiMaria74 1 12-29 16:45
To ceslou: Thankyou!Maria74 1 12-29 15:04
To eliferen: hi Elif!Maria74 1 12-28 17:31
To bult: Hi MarcelMaria74 1 12-28 17:27
To ZorroII: bonjour:)Maria74 2 12-27 12:37
To WALTERito: Commercial...Maria74 2 12-27 12:25
To lukdm: thankyouMaria74 1 12-27 11:23
To Attila: Hi Attila!Maria74 1 12-27 11:17
To pablominto: GraphicalMaria74 1 12-27 10:32
To JohnTulip: calling Canada;))Maria74 1 12-27 10:29
To chiaraluna: Magical hillsMaria74 1 12-27 10:27
To kitflorendo: Title!!!Maria74 1 12-27 09:28
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wow.. another stunning composition from you my dear.. the use of both complementary and contrasting shapes is wonderful! and those hills are so beautiful... you should come and visit me here in Umbria where we're surrounded by magical hills like this :-)

truly excellent image and beautifully presented with great framing.. bravissima!

big hugs,
Ayda

Very well composed
Nice contrast of colors and sharpness is excellent.
Greetings from Canada this time .. and a Tulip for you Bye Marija
John T

Very nicely done, Marija! The simplicity really works, it makes the pic almost graphic. Only one small thing: there are some jpeg artifacts around the plant leaf edges. (Then again, many of my pics have that as well.) Good job.

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  • lukdm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 381 W: 3 N: 21] (1350)
  • [2005-12-27 10:17]
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very nice marija

Bonjour Maria,

Let me start by saying that your introduction made a huge impression on me. Especially the comment about the world being a big TL and hobby vs. life style. Ain't that the truth?!?
Not only your philosophy stunted me, but so did your portrait. :o)

I really enjoy this shot perfectly composed photograph. The palm tree, the not too much saturated colors and the DOF make this shot a pure delight.

However, the title raises a question. Where do we draw the line between minimalism and graphic?

A wonderful simple representation of the area. IMO commercial value (it would be the perfect image for a travel-agency brochure)
TFS

Tip 1 for determination of the exact location : use the practical maps of viaMichelin
Tip 2 : you can just type in "marmaris" in the TL-page (box top-left) and look at the other postings to see what they came up with ;-)

such a rest...
groetjes, giuseppe.

Beautiful photo Marija...everything fits so well in the composition...i thing the crop and add the border makes this photo a real beauty...well done!!!

Jos

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  • OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 169 W: 68 N: 327] (2335)
  • [2005-12-27 11:09]

I like the layers in the photograph. Interesting POV. I think it's a good pic.

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  • Yug Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 168 W: 0 N: 89] (1864)
  • [2005-12-27 11:20]

Very nice shot Marija! Oppoistion of warm colour in foregroud and cold blue in backgroud bring strong contrast. Yhe compoistion is also well chosen. I like it!
Guy

One of the best photos posted today. It's amazing how flat the picture becomes without the green leaves on right. Receding hills are great and the letterbox framing works very well.
Barry
PS.If kit says its good-it must be good!!!!!

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  • Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 549 W: 69 N: 53] (5119)
  • [2005-12-27 12:36]

Including the leafs is exceptional idea and turned an ordinary beach scene into real work of art. I wish the colour of the sea [small portion] was a bit more enhanced. Great work.

Alban

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3312 W: 788 N: 4424] (19908)
  • [2005-12-27 14:37]

Here is a quality of photograph at which I would like to arrive. A great simplicity in the subject, a great elegance in the presentation. I like the repetition of the roofs of wicker with that of the mountains. Very effective composition. Congratulations! Annie

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  • Soph Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 207 W: 0 N: 89] (726)
  • [2005-12-27 14:44]

This is such interesting cropping. I almost want to see the rest of the photo, Im curious but then again I like it just they way it is cut off. Colors are great!
Sophia

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  • niner Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 222 W: 11 N: 0] (2068)
  • [2005-12-27 14:54]

compo, colours, depth... all is perfect. great shot Marija

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  • limba3 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1082 W: 436 N: 421] (13320)
  • [2005-12-27 14:59]

Hi.
¦wietnie parasole komponuj± siê z górami w tle.
Nice colours. Goog work.
Anna

Hi! Marija,

Tahaitian surfboards, which way to head?!
This is straight out of a Book for me and a well seen crop. The opposite colours playing with form in an uncluttered frame. Very appealing composition and the essence here is the insignificant soft white cloud that rimlights the hill tops. Well done Marija!
Very good graphic sense! TFS.
Mike.

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  • bult Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 229 W: 24 N: 86] (1037)
  • [2005-12-27 17:05]
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The resemblence (?) between (?) the front and the back is sooo nice. Did you shoot it like this or is it a crop from a larger shot?

M

Mmmmm, very pretty, Marija. Interesting, with the different shapes & colors. Your composition is perfect, IMO. Love those layered mountains.

Doing ok?
Gayle :)

Hi Marija...
Amazing...! From the thumbnail I was sure this was heavily processed... However you have managed to capture this clean graphic image just like that... Indeed amazing! Great cropping & colours, wonderful layers of fading mountains
Regards,
Pablo -

Back with my smile! OK

Just as I find something fabulous I run out of medals to award.
Stunning image, M. A fantastic mixture of texture, colour, distance, nearness, invitation ... AND, MY PERSONAL FAVOURITE, TWO GROUPS OF THREE.
I will return to fulfill my obligations tomorrow.

Hi Marija,
excellent shot!
Great compo and colours.
Well done
Ciao
Gigi

Great minimalism. You are expert like this shots. Its typical mountains of Marmaris scenery. Your POV is so great, very well seen really. Including the palm tree adds much taste to shot. Great shot with nice white framing.
And dont worry, Marmaris is province of Mugla city, you are right. :)
Elif

very cool shot maria :)
the colors and DOF are excellent
very well composed shot, i love the green leaf on the right to break up the shapes

points added :)

wow. how do you do it? I love it. Those mountains look so cool. Great colors as well. Great job once again. JP

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  • lucbus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2115 W: 92 N: 1855] (10309)
  • [2005-12-28 16:59]

Hi Marija,
I like this simple composition with the multiple layers in the background and the contrasting texture in the foreground. Excellent composition.
Luc

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  • galba Gold Star Critiquer [C: 53 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-12-29 5:10]

Fabulosa, genial... la sencillez su mejor valor

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  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 581 W: 18 N: 295] (2106)
  • [2005-12-29 13:10]

This is a fine image. The shape of the beach houses (or unbrellas) echoing the shape of the distant hills, the colours, the texture - all mix to produce a beautiful photograph.
Salil

this is nice marija, pastel colors. leaves the feeling of mystery. Simple yet a great image.

Ops! Marija I JUST LOVE IT, Love it because it is moody, Full of colors, Well framed, Well bordered, Well seen, and well presented.
A SPERCIAL THANKS to you for this professional shot ;-)

EXcelent coloures, with blie mountines in backgrounds.
Marjan

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  • letr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1162 W: 419 N: 1111] (6780)
  • [2005-12-30 14:16]
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It's all in the aprouch ..like the minimalistic capture , the colors and the shapes very well captured in a beautiful compo !!

Hi Marija & Happy 2006!

An absolutely stunning image, with marvellous use of a shallow dof. Excellent foreground sharpness. I like the overlap & addition of the palm frond at right. Congratulations!

Dobar dan Marija!

and Happy New Year! I just love your vision of the beach. Superb forms and colors. Well seen, captured and presented.

Big Hug !
Robert

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5707 W: 197 N: 2475] (9761)
  • [2006-01-01 17:58]

Hi Marija & Happy 2006!

Beautiful picture and colors
I adored the idea, taste of everything
that it relates beach.
Very deserved congratulations

Sérgio

Hi Marija,
Very nice picture... simply and beautifull.
The background against the beach hat results very well.
Good job
José

Excellent game with hill tops and similar shapes that are repeating over and over! Colors are great, as well as the composition - that palmtree broke the compo in a very powerful way!
Excellent work, trully a masterpiece, congratulations!

Pozdrav,
Petko

P.S. Odlučili smo onu tvoju "vazu" staviti na zid u kombinaciji sa još nekim oblicima. Mislim da će se i ova fotka dobro uklopiti u "društvo". Jednog lijepog dana :)

Crisp and simple and very, very effective.
Best wishes, Simon

Marija, it is an advert for a holiday magazine, a brilliant artistic shot... what more can I say? it is simply:

BEAUTIFUL!!!

Shelly:)

marija,
well presented,beautiful compo.the minimalistic approach is very tasty here,
regards

I don't know how I missed it. It is an amazing picture for the way it demarcates diverse colours and yet blends them to create a unity of theme. More than minimalism it is harmony that is the striking feature of your picture. And with your deft cropping you have truly managed to enhance this ballet of hues Marija. Brilliant - it is.
Mukesh

Oooo :) Perfect Color...
Welcome Türkiye :)

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  • kedo Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 26 W: 10 N: 0] (1274)
  • [2006-03-21 8:33]
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perfect photo marija!
turkey? thanks for your turkey photos

what an amazing picture! beautiful colors and great composition... you've really captured the beauty of Marmaris and the Turkish coastline!

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  • btokaz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1060 W: 127 N: 167] (5744)
  • [2006-05-11 17:53]

This is absolutely perfect.
Tomasz

Hi Marija,
Really good shot. I really like the use of minimalism and also the superb colours and details. The layered effect in the background is also very nice. Well seen and framed!
Claudia

wow ... i had missed this one :o)
magnificent :o)
TFS it Marija
ili :o)

This picture is amazing. Nice composition and nice soft pastel colors. I like the minimalistic approach. Regards, Yvonne

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