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Relaxing


Relaxing
Photo Information
Copyright: Janos Gardonyi (gabbypal) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 456 W: 2 N: 137] (5389)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-09-20
Categories: Daily Life, Humorous, Decisive Moment, Action
Camera: Canon EOS 300D Digital Rebel, 18-55mm EF-S Lens, Compact Flash 128MB
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-13 10:03
Viewed: 110
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
one way of sitting comfortably on a bench without a back support.
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Hi Janos

I think this photo would be better if you focused on the couple, as it is the focal point is several metres beyond them.

Also your lighting conditions were very difficult, with some blown out highlights.

Sorry - I think you have done better than this!

Rew

Hi Janos
the idea is very good
and the realization can be better
just you should focus on the couple
the other things of the composition are good.
take care and have a nice day.
Riste.

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