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Marie-Eve 7


Marie-Eve 7
Photo Information
Copyright: denis arseno (atomas59) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 432 W: 399 N: 295] (2308)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-06-13
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Pentax Digital *ist, Sigma 70-300 f/4-5.6 APO DG Macro
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/180 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-06-21 15:11
Viewed: 280
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
It's getting late, and the light will soon be to low contrast to shoot this type of shot. So we're basicly fooling around and trying different things...pose and situation. During the viewing, I had to decided between 2. One I like the expression of the face, but the hand on the shoe, was not really showing the fingers. So I went with this one...The expression in the face is a little less interesting...but I rather goes for the overall picture.
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To skot: Hi skot.atomas59 1 06-24 01:26
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I like this one. It just feels natural, real, offbeat and relaxed. The little triangle of visible face works well in this shot, because we don't expect eye contact and are pleased for whatever connection we can get.

Well done in my opinion.
Rew

hello Denis
i too liked the shot
i like the idea and the pose
fine black and white conversions
good low light here
thanks for haring

regards
MAnuj MEhta

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1711 W: 16 N: 838] (15090)
  • [2009-06-22 3:59]

This looks very nice in b&w. I'm sure my daughter has the same dress :) Nice natural pose and very good detail. TFS

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1349 W: 0 N: 1644] (13402)
  • [2009-06-22 12:08]

Hi Denis,this picture looks like charm and style,the ajusting of her shoe is a fine way of posing ;],,hair style and dress,style!

jan

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  • skot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 75 W: 10 N: 72] (408)
  • [2009-06-23 21:53]
  • [+]

Hey Denis,

I really like this photo. I must amend my previous critique of Marie-Eve 2 to say that it is the second best shot of Marie-Eve; this one's the best you've posted.

Her posing here is so natural and fluid, she seems completely at-ease or uninterested in the camera. In fact, this almost feels like a candid photo.

I like all the little triangles in this image; her hair, the shape created by her leg and arm, the shape of her feet in the shoes.

Great work!
skot

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