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Jo-Anne


Jo-Anne
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Copyright: Leica Rozeault (Leica) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 82 W: 41 N: 60] (2107)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03-21
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D300 with MB_D10, Nikkor 60mm 2.8 Micro
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-06-23 7:57
Viewed: 209
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Jo-Anne is my wife. The mother of my 2 childs.
Natural light only... and some retouching.
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Hi Leica,
I really like this portrait. I like how you composed this shot and the angle of the frame. The eye contact is excellent her eye color is striking. Nice shot.
Regards,
Kevin

Le cadrage est magnifique et la lumière naturelle met le visage en valeur.
Je supprimerais juste le petit bout de vêtement bleu, en-dessous à gauche, mais c'est vraiment un détail.
Bravo.

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 340 W: 0 N: 405] (2178)
  • [2009-06-23 15:29]

Hi Leica, The composition of this portrait of Jo- Anne is beautiful, well thought out and presented, colours and focus brilliant. TFS
Bri

I like this shot - the composition, the light, the diagonal flow of the beads achieved via your tilt.

Jo-Anne is beautiful - and I'm sure that is the case with or without PP work.

Is the necklace a little too busy and distracting?

There is also a touch of lightness on her cheek beside the earring - a result of sharpening, or a reflection off the earring, I'm not sure which.

Good job, sits well with your style.

Rew

WOW! I must say, you snagged a beauty! Those eyes are mesmerizing Leica! Exotic shot, the colors go well with the whole theme, and the bit of blue ADDS to this shot....I'm not sure why...but I love it! Blue and brown go so well together, it's just enough, without distracting! Her eyes hold you in!
B-)
Linda

Leica, what a beautiful wife and mother, and model you have. You are very fortunate to have the best of all three! Great use of available light, perspective and composition. A+1 Excellente!

JoeGoff, Louisville, KY

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  • djw Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 65 W: 0 N: 55] (873)
  • [2009-06-23 20:56]

Hi Leica, really nicely composed, beautiful colors and expression. Thanks, dave

Good idea. Beautiful attractive eyes. Beautiful portrait of the beauty.

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