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Poster
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Copyright: Leica Rozeault (Leica) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 82 W: 41 N: 60] (2127)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-09-04
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon D300 with MB_D10, Nikkor 17-55mm f/2.8G IF-ED AF-S DX
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/80 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-09-11 18:15
Viewed: 198
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Elsiane is a Singer/Songwriter. www.elsiane.com
This is for a poster of a show.

Natural light (that's the best) and manual mode, as always.

Thanks for viewing! Your feedback is valuable to me.
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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3312 W: 788 N: 4424] (19910)
  • [2009-09-11 20:09]

Bonsoir Leica,
Si cette jeune femme a autant de talent qu'elle est belle, sa carrière est prometteuse!
La lumière naturelle est effectivement très bonne et rend magnifiquement l'éclat de son teint, les chatoyants reflets de sa robe et la richesse des textures du mur de pierres. L'expression est intense, mais j'aurais aimé plus de délié dans la pose. Ce qui me dérange un peu dans la composition, c'est la pierre qui se détache du mur en arrière d'elle. J'ai la frousse qu'elle lui tombe sur le dos! Peut-être un autre recadrage... Quoiqu'il en soit, Elsiane peut ajouter fièrement ce magnifique portrait à son portfiolio!
Bravo! Annie

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  • psyce Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 171 W: 11 N: 100] (1625)
  • [2009-09-11 21:22]

beautiful model and portrait shot.... I love the composition and textures.... well done... TFS

Leica, GREAT portrait of this lovely woman. At first look I am drawn to the rock formation above her instead of immediately to the subject. If this was shot for the purpose of adding type and titles to it then it works well. Otherwise I would crop very tight on the beautiful lady to show off her appeal, and soften all the way around. See (Compare).

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