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Family Day


Family Day
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Copyright: Susan Paulin (suetheboss) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 25 W: 0 N: 4] (196)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-01-26
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/2.8
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-01-30 11:42
Viewed: 254
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This will be my last picture from our day at the camp. I just love the effect of old with the horses and the camp behind. This is my boyfriend with his youngest son.
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Hi Susan
nice chot
fine black and white composition...
Well done!
Regards
Zoli

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  • kanton Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 723 W: 5 N: 1293] (5384)
  • [2009-02-02 11:42]

Hi Susan!
Great composition and presentation,nice winterscape in this B&W image.TFS
Well done
Regards
Kostas

Hi Susan!

Nice portrait! And good postprocessing with b/w!

Regards from the Netherlands,
Edward

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 515 W: 132 N: 970] (7092)
  • [2009-02-02 23:00]

Hi Susan,I like that you showed this in B&W nice effective mood,boy it feels cold viewing it,those horses don't seem to mind the cold as much as the young boy seems to:)

Ron

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  • Tezza Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 175 W: 95 N: 266] (2719)
  • [2009-02-03 2:39]
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Susan
I think this is one of your best. B&W works well to convey the cold feeling. The image is sharp and well composed. The frame works well here (from Photoscape I think) but use it sparingly as the pattern looks very familiar. I see that most of your photos are considerably smaller than the permitted 800 pixel, 3KB limits. This puts them at a disadvantage and I suggest you look to get them as big as the limits allow.
Terry

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  • BT123 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 93 W: 1 N: 139] (955)
  • [2009-02-03 6:00]

Hi Sue
I like this B/W white photo with some very prominent elements, however it's almost like a portrait shot and I would have preferred a clean background. To me it is bit distracting especially the house. I am surprised using f2.8 the background is not blur.
Best regards
Balwant

Great family shot, lots of visual interest all around.
The edging work in the processing is really neat.
Nicely done!
- Vincent

belle photo Sue

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  • Ber Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 298 W: 67 N: 67] (4660)
  • [2009-02-17 8:31]

Hi Susan
Family album ;) Nice portrait and very interesting pp
regards

Bonjour Susan,
Belle prise de vue à l'ancienne et jolie présentation, beau contraste Noir & Blanc et encadrement. Je pense qu'il faisait très froid...
jolie point de vue et composition..
compliments
Michel

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