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I took this one last summer just before going out for a long bicycle ride. I tried many framing experiences but it seemed to me that the simplicity of this one is not so bad.
If you find some better way to crop it, i'd be glad to see it. |
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- kanton
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(5528) - [2008-12-18 12:46]
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Hi Pascal!
Beautiful macro shot and composition,
natural colours
Well done.
Best regards,
Kostas
Hello Pascal-Eric,
this is a very nice picture of a very nice flower .. but something keeps it from being absolutely stunning. I don't quite know what it is.. maybe too much space around the actual flower, maybe it is not as sharp as it could be, maybe something else..
And you are right: the simple frame suits the composition well but since you like my "specialist frame" ;-), I made a little workshop.
Regards
Soya
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