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Hold on Sailor


Hold on Sailor
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Copyright: Ronald Kelman (RSK) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 514 W: 131 N: 965] (7054)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-06-23
Categories: Daily Life, Transportation, Event, Decisive Moment
Camera: Nikon D80 Digital SLR
Exposure: f/7.4
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Friday Theme 2009/10/02 "deep blue" [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-10-01 13:19
Viewed: 173
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is from a Russian Training ship as it was docked
in Victoria Harbour. These young men are sea cadets
& I don't think I would like to try what they were doing, when out at sea.Does my POV work, all critiques welcomed,BUT NO POINTS PLEASE & THANK YOU.
Cheers
Ron
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Hold on SailorRSK 1 10-03 08:57
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  • WTS Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 272 W: 56 N: 269] (1405)
  • [2009-10-01 13:34]
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Ron as the intent seems to be to show the sailors, and noting you likely would not be able to get above them, then it works well, however when I first saw it I had thought where"s the rest of the ship it seemed too tight of a crop.
But this is where notes play an important role to help me the observer, and yours worked well.

no points as you asked .

Wayne

Hi Ron:
Super capture of this amazing scene...you have done very well in details composition & exposures:)
David

e va bene
speravo che fossi lassu' anche te magari...
bravo ottima immagine da riflesso circonciso
bel dettaglio anche se un po' sfocata o forse è il mio monitor
ma mi piace

Anda

Hi Ron

Your POV is fine but I find the composition of this shot too busy, may have been better if you had zoomed in a little to concentrate on just some of the cadets more.
Added a workshop to show you what I mean.

Regards Derek

Hi Ro! Beautiful capture, great composition, and amazing in the mean time. I like it much. Best regards Csabi

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