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Oeil


Oeil
Photo Information
Copyright: Alain Gregoire (LunaSun) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 140 W: 0 N: 0] (142)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-01-08
Categories: Friends/Family, Experimental, Macro, Mood
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/6 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-01-29 10:28
Viewed: 931
Points: 36
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Une photo avec laquelle je joue avec la lumière.
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Different from from so many eye shots, this one works. Great Stuff.
Best Wishes

  • Great 
  • maga Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 62 W: 0 N: 12] (528)
  • [2006-01-29 11:23]

i like it. it's not as sharp as such photos used to be but anyway, nice mood remained:)
- Magda

  • Great 
  • Seena Gold Star Critiquer [C: 70 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-01-29 12:12]

no no no. still need more work here. keep trying

I like the fading into white on the righthand side, it gives mood to the photo. I am not sure that the soft focus works?

  • Needs Improvement 
  • letoun Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 210 W: 0 N: 38] (1329)
  • [2006-01-29 12:37]

vraiment domage que l'oeil ne soit pas net. C'est à mon sens l'elelment le plus important.
Raph

Il faut parfois briser les règles, et ici selon moi, tu le fais bien. Ce qui m'attire, c'est la belle gradation de lumière, comme si l'oeil regardait l'au delà. Une belle oeuvre originale, Alain!

  • Great 
  • samr Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 758 W: 44 N: 433] (3323)
  • [2006-02-03 18:49]

What makes this shot Alain is that it is not your typical eye shot - your sharp focus on the eye lashes with a a shallow DOF, along with the strong light from the right make a different perspective on the subject. Very nicely done, Sam

Even though it does have a claim to be original, I don't agree with this photo composition. There isn't much to focus on with the eye except for a few eyelashes.

I like the POV on your shot, well done.

GT

  • Great 
  • tinman Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 417 W: 8 N: 221] (1622)
  • [2006-02-15 13:19]

this is good, will watch your work - well done. Tim

  • Great 
  • diana Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 208 W: 24 N: 94] (1115)
  • [2006-03-02 6:03]

Hi Alain!!
I like this photo because it capt my attencion! It´s diferent! Congratulations!

take care
diana

  • Great 
  • SILVA Gold Star Critiquer [C: 321 W: 0 N: 0] (3917)
  • [2006-03-14 15:52]

formidable..un grand regard..congratulation

Close up on eyes are always difficult because the camera wants to focus on the eyelashes because they are closest to the camera. I think this happened with your eye shot. The composition is very good indeed. I think it is well worth trying again and see if you can focus on the iris. If you have a tripod, it is best to use it. If not a pile of CD's works well.

  • Great 
  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1302 W: 2 N: 202] (15658)
  • [2006-04-02 14:05]

Si c'est votre oeil il est beau!!

eye...: most important element for photography...
best wishes to you

Alain très bien fait. TFS,
Fran

Hello. Wonderful macro... Great shot. Different and nice. Good work. :O)

Very good detail Alain, Nice macro shot.

Hakan

alain,
this eye shot is different than the others because of your presentation. good composition with color. nice soft almost blurry image gives it the dreamy look.
well done.

Hi Alain,
Eye shot from different angle. Good.


Srinivasan

Most people would normally focus on the eye but you focused on the lashes and I really like that. It's different and interesting. TFS.

Hi Alain,
that's an interesting shot - everybody would expect the focus on the eye - but here it is on the hairs - you uses low DOF with only f3.2.
But it's realy romantic and dreamy, thanks
Sabine - wishnugaruda

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