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Sunrise in B&W


Sunrise in B&W
Photo Information
Copyright: Jose Adolfo Segura (jafsc) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 504 W: 53 N: 88] (4621)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-01-18
Categories: Event
Camera: Nikon F4, Nikkor 16mm f2.8, Fuji Sensia 200
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-02-02 4:55
Viewed: 741
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 25
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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To cloverstar: compo..jafsc 2 02-03 09:43
To nova: Merci Michel!jafsc 1 02-03 02:31
To nova: Merci Michel!jafsc 1 02-03 02:31
To tinman: Hello Timjafsc 1 02-03 02:27
To ballyna: :) Nejatjafsc 1 02-03 02:11
To ciore: Viktorijajafsc 1 02-03 02:10
To emanuela: Thank you Emanuelajafsc 1 02-03 02:09
To lobo: frame or not frame:)jafsc 1 02-03 02:07
To joker: POVjafsc 1 02-03 02:02
To lollie: Mercijafsc 1 02-03 01:56
To josealopes: :) Obrigadojafsc 1 02-03 01:55
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a beautiful photo,
good Black & White and quality of image

Parabens

José Lopes

Salut Jose
La vache ! le 16mm ça tue!

  • Good 
  • joker Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 81 W: 17 N: 45] (889)
  • [2006-02-02 5:28]
  • [+]

Interesting subject and superb light you've got here. Though IMHO the composition looks incomplete with 1/3 of the frame being grey empty space. If you walked closer to that fence, I think, or used the longer focal length, this would improve the picture.

  • Great 
  • lobo Gold Star Critiquer [C: 73 W: 0 N: 0] (3)
  • [2006-02-02 5:40]
  • [+]

a nice shot,light and tones... but not the frame...

great job, i like your arrangement of architectural elements set up with the landscape
to my fv
emanuela

  • Great 
  • ciore Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 782 W: 3 N: 108] (2305)
  • [2006-02-02 5:55]
  • [+]

special pov and choise of composition, very good converted in b&w, just good one,Jose
Viktorija

jose,
a perfect scene for using that ultra wide lens actually;it's effect look wonderful in this compo.
and b&w color tones are very nice ,
regards

Love the angle of capture. Good use of wide lens. This is so well seen and captured.

Very nice composition, although I think walking a few steps more forward towards the lake would eliminate the gap between the fence and yourself. I did a workshop to explain a different crop suggestion. I hope you don't mind. The lighting is awesome, and I like the effect from the lens (fish-eye?)
Diana

Un lever de soleil en noir et blanc, il fallait oser et le résultat est très joli.
Un effet graphique très réussi.
Bravo.

Stefan

  • Great 
  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2734 W: 263 N: 864] (8645)
  • [2006-02-02 23:37]
  • [+]

Belle image poétique Beau jeu de lumière capté ici! Je trouve le traitement de l'image,lorsqu'on le compare à la photo originale,des plus intéressants! Michel

Wow! what a shot - excellent tones and detail even in the shadow - what did you scan in withj? Well done - points later

Preciosa imagen, gracias por darla a conocer.

  • Great 
  • baran Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 94 W: 0 N: 13] (797)
  • [2006-09-07 3:40]

wondderful image

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