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Prochain arrêt : le ciel


Prochain arrêt : le ciel
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Copyright: Alain Gregoire (LunaSun) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 140 W: 0 N: 0] (142)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-07-12
Categories: Mood
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-02-15 12:37
Viewed: 779
Points: 28
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Juste une idée qui m'est venue en tête!
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haha, Alain, great creative idea. I is just a bit dark on my screen (might be my screen though).

Marleen

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  • tinman Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 417 W: 8 N: 221] (1622)
  • [2006-02-15 13:18]

excellent idea and capture, a touch more contrast maybe? sorry no time at present with work, but will make more effort to crit better soon again. Tim

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  • diana Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 208 W: 24 N: 94] (1115)
  • [2006-03-08 16:56]

Hi Alain!!
I love this idea, you ´re very creative!The mood is very good!Congratulations!!!

take care
diana

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  • SILVA Gold Star Critiquer [C: 321 W: 0 N: 0] (3917)
  • [2006-03-14 15:51]

tres drole..j,aime votre travail..salut

I like the idea very much. Reminds me of when I used to make paper planes when I was a child. I think the image may benefit from using Curves to lighten a bit. The composition is great, and I like your choice of black and white.

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  • mytp Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 101 W: 0 N: 15] (284)
  • [2006-04-03 5:41]

Nice composition! A bit more contrast would be nice indeed

Hi... A very nice photo. The composition is just great...

Good Work...

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  • pranab Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 734 W: 0 N: 537] (3141)
  • [2006-04-12 12:25]

alain,
wondeful pov and great creative compositio. this to me symbolizes the hopes and dreams of every human being. good light and texture.

I like it! Alain, very good idea. This mood's good and not finished all the time :)

Regards

Hakan

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3312 W: 788 N: 4424] (19918)
  • [2006-06-19 14:43]

Bonjour Alain,
Bien, tes idées sont excellentes. Très original comme sujet. J'aime ta composition et le traitement en noir et blanc. La sobriété convient bien aux avions de papier. Et le titre est tellement porteur de tout l'espoir que nous mettons dans leur confection. Bravo! Annie

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  • Tintin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2198 W: 267 N: 345] (1982)
  • [2006-06-20 17:44]

Une bonne idée très bien réalisée, Alain, quoique j'aurais possiblement aimé avoir un tantinet plus d'espace à gauch car le queue de l'avion touche le cadre. Belle composition en diagonal et belle conversion vers le N&B. Bravo!

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  • Yacow Gold Star Critiquer [C: 69 W: 0 N: 2] (1723)
  • [2006-06-25 11:52]

fantastic idea:) I like it:) regards jacek

Hi Alain,
Elegant lines and well framed!
DOF spot on, pleasing composition with crossing diagonals...
B&W works well, maybe the hand is a tad dark..?
Nice idea, well managed!
Regards,
Pablo -

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 757 W: 37 N: 423] (3843)
  • [2006-06-30 23:59]

Hi Alain, A message from heart to deliver....Well express mood.

Wong

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