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Copyright: michel bazinet (nova) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2932 W: 264 N: 827] (8071)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-04-08
Categories: Mood
Exposure: f/13.0, 1/500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): 50-59 points- Part 7, 80-89 points, 70 points or more !, 60-69 points [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-04-30 7:55
Viewed: 998
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 96
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Here is a color photograph that I took in a downtown Montreal alley.What we see here are strictly shadows created by the black staircase on the brick wall and on the street.Have a great Sunday!
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quelle beau jeu d'ombres et de lumière Michel! Quel oeil! Bien vu!

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  • ciore Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 880 W: 1 N: 99] (2159)
  • [2006-04-30 8:04]

Absolute fantastic,Michel
high-level composition!
8 -line staves, super!!!
i'd like to writte here..
right now :)
Great sunday to you too!
Viktorija

Bonjour Michel, que de magnifiques ombres. Belle occasion saisie en effet.

En premier on croit que c'est du N/B, puis on voit du brun sur le sol :)

J'aime beaucoup.

Bonne journee, Yan :)

Another excellent 'shadow shot' Michel. Creative and appealing.

Excellent graphism Michel, your artistic streak is always vigourously producing excellent results.

That's a great caught Michel, the crop is perfect.

Marco

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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1128 W: 60 N: 189] (23098)
  • [2006-04-30 8:33]

Tout à Fait épatant Michel. Bravo pour cette belle trouvaille, quelle belle variétée de lignes ici et bien composé.

Great shot Michel, great graphical effect. Well seen...
Tomasz

Superb work!
Very good lightning and composition!

have a nice evening and thanks for sharing, Karina:)

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  • Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 626 W: 71 N: 57] (5093)
  • [2006-04-30 9:21]
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Yaycks, this one is so well seen pattern of geometrics. I amused myself by counting how many triangles are inside the shot - and lost count. I would have probably cropped the bottom part - and by doing so make a mistake. Very nice street art shot. Well done.

A.

Merveilleuse photo, Michel! Une plaisir pour l'oeil que de voir toutes ces lignes qui s'entre-croisent. Bravo!

Woooh a very impressive image!!!
Very good seen.

very nice graphical photo here Michel :)
love the play with the light and shadows
very well seen and captured

Excellent! GRreat lines and shapes and a careful produced pic! Well done

Hi Michel
Great shot, stark, geometric, graphic whatever it looks good.
best wishes
Rob :)

Wow!What a graphical photo!I know it is not a B&W picture,because I saw the green "N" on the left.Very... very well done!Impressive!
Regards,
chiping

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  • drymd29 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1628 W: 270 N: 684] (7573)
  • [2006-04-30 13:26]

Like an openend piano in the basement. Wonderful geometry; shades are secure parallel to the architecture brick lines.
The walls texture is is lively between the shades.
Great capture Michel.
Huub

beautiful use of shadow and line...perfect composition...reminds me of a similar shot i posted recently of shadows on a wall created by a staircase...i too found mine in an alley...great eye...peace***

Jeu de lignes complexe et très net! Belel opposition des lignes d'un sens et de l'autre. Ajoutez la richesse de la texture dans des tons assez rapproché. Sobre et urbain. J'aime!

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  • rosana Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 392 W: 2 N: 256] (3307)
  • [2006-04-30 22:13]

Simple, net et un "Eye Catcher" ...

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3196 W: 365 N: 2641] (11371)
  • [2006-05-01 6:02]

Michel, this is a beautiful capture. Very well seen, taken at exactly the right time of day...
It would have been perfect if you had removed the remnants of the plant first. And maybe, just maybe, in b&w the green graffito would be less prominent.
I too have a slight preference for the cropped version.
Anyway, magnificent. TFS

Excellent shot, lovely symmetrical patterns created from the light and shadows. Nicely composed and very sharp.
Vassilis

Well seen. Looks great.

TFS,
Pedro

Very graphic, very tasteful :)

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1365 W: 122 N: 1939] (16221)
  • [2006-05-02 9:51]

Très belle composition Michel, très beau graphisme sur ces murs. Du beau travail. Merci,

Mario

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  • logon Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 158 W: 10 N: 4] (1058)
  • [2006-05-02 10:42]

A great shot with a most beautiful game of lines!
It look like a monochromatic photo.
Nice the composition.
Giuseppe.

Hi Michel,

Great work with these line, i like a lot. Great graphism, and perfect b&w.

regards,

ferran

Great use of lines. Love the title Michel.

Impressionnante capture de ces ombres qui en effet font penser à une harpe ou des portées de musique.

Wonderful patterns. A busy composition but it all work harmoniously together.

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3296 W: 662 N: 1893] (15833)
  • [2006-05-04 7:44]

Superb music, Michel !
Wonderful seen and done. Congrats !!!


tfs and have a great day,
v

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 863 W: 37 N: 443] (3833)
  • [2006-05-05 1:26]

Simply Artistic!!! Good play with light & shadow. Line + Shape + texture > Nice in 2D effect although it's 3D in reallity ;) Well done & great observed!

Wong

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4047 W: 207 N: 3459] (26357)
  • [2006-05-06 1:14]

Salut michel

Superb graphism & sharpness. I like the tiny section of green top left. (Even though I am not a fan of graffiti). Well done!

you could almost hear the piano! wonderful abstraction... tfs!
-Tunc

Wonderful play of lines! You can easily get lost in this photo ... :)

Katya

The layers upon layers of shadows and lines really works well. Great comp!!

Je dois dire qu'elle, «est écoeurante»! Je jazze. Bravo.

jn.
Et je ne viens pas chercher des points pour ma dernière publication.

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4998 W: 178 N: 5838] (31259)
  • [2006-07-05 9:30]

Hi Michel,

Beautiful visual, the forms and shadows
they are wonderful, big shot here!
Congratulations, I adored that!

Sérgio

Bonjour Michel,
This is excellent. Geometry, poetry, rhythm. I like these art trouvee types of images - art where you least think it should be.
Salut.
John

absolutely great observation, very emotional to me:))
I havn't seen you arround lately...and I a=have also been away for 2 weeks...well, now we're back;-)
Sabina

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  • dada Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 992 W: 48 N: 385] (6552)
  • [2006-07-13 7:16]

Hi Michel!

excellent composition, wonderful graphical effect obtained by the play light-shaddows... congrats!

anca

beautiful graphical composition with the light and shadows :)
you are a true master of shadows from what i see in your gallery michel :)
thanks for sharing

X

Hi Michel,

As I browse your work, ive notice and im facinated in this one. I like the way you see and use the shadows here. Hope that I could also spot this scene too. Wish me luck :-).

Cheers,
Jomari

I wish my english be better. Excelent work. That's all I can say now! Thank You for pleasure to see it!

Had a quick look at your gallery, and I LOVE this! The elements you incorporated are so simple but they all work very well together producing very effective patterns.
Very well done,
Jako

great composition! the shadows are coming in very strong.. well captured! F/13 did its magic!!

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  • NINIX Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 332 W: 151 N: 575] (6243)
  • [2007-04-02 14:12]

Hi Michel

A great picture! Fantastic graphical immage.
I missed this one but saw it on the homepage.

Thanks,

Hendrik

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  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 531 W: 40 N: 631] (6412)
  • [2007-06-07 7:15]

A stunning. Nothing more can say

Nice play of light and shadow.
I like the endless geometrical shapes...
Garo

just perfect!!! I like it...

artur

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  • dgarr Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 28 W: 1 N: 88] (527)
  • [2007-08-14 18:49]

Nice work Michel:

Great timing for this. The angle of light creates the perfect angle of shadows against the bricks and working with the angle of the stairs. Is nearly B&W now and is a strong enough image to work as a B&W, the there is really no need to desaturate as the is so little color as is. Love this!

David

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