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Neglect
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Copyright: Josh Crozier (Humanist) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 109 W: 39 N: 74] (501)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 5000
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-05-10 18:46
Viewed: 662
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Route 24 in Caledon Ontario is home to a number of barns in various states of collapse. I captured this one because I liked the warped roof on this barn.

Judging from the evidence around the scene, this structure used to be at least twice as tall.

Comments, help, workshops all appreciated. I am just learning.

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Nice lines and mood. I would have added a black frame.

Hello Josh. Nice photo of an old stone barn. I like old buildings, even decaying ones. They have a feeling about them that is unique and makes you think. I cannot believe no one else except the one person has commented on this image. You've got a good shot here. It is a study in contrasts of shadow and light,texture and lines. I like it. Now all you need is a way to set it back a little to invite us all in to look. I have literally hundreds of color and Black & White shots that would look okay or even good on their own. A nice tastfully done frame or top and bottom black bars (used a lot in panoramic shots) makes the image better and creates a symmetry that pleases, and invites. I like your style though, man. Keep them coming.

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