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Copyright: Michael Safro (hobbitenok2005) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 95 W: 2 N: 13] (377)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-05-16
Categories: Mood
Exposure: f/2.2, 1/30 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-05-17 19:56
Viewed: 752
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 20
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To ornis: Bonjour Jean,hobbitenok2005 1 11-26 20:23
To Janone: Well,hobbitenok2005 1 11-20 12:32
To rodebert: Great job!!!hobbitenok2005 1 05-18 01:16
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  • Jonas Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 37 W: 15 N: 10] (155)
  • [2006-05-17 20:54]
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This picture remembers me the famous Mona Lisa. When I look at the girl expression I canīt say if she is sad or happy.
I feel a very "unformal" look in this photo!
Thatīs decided, this one goes to my favorite galery.
I want to see more photos from you!
Thanks for sharing!

Warm and soft portrait shot, I'm not sure if it can be improved..
tfs

Alaettin

I agree with others, its a great shot, but it can be improved.
You have orange light from regular home bulbs (need to adjust the WB),... get your grey card out :) hehehe
This foto has this 70's feeling ...so I did a small workshop,.. hope you like it.

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer [C: 3409 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-11-20 10:53]
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I almost kissed her. lol
A beautiful horizonal portrait.
Well captured, Jan

Wonderful portrait with a very nice composition and a very beautiful girl.
Congratulations!

The mood is absolutely perfect. The angle is quite original and makes a striking portrait. Her eyes stand out because of the soft shadow. Good work.
Kind Regards,
Mike

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1719 W: 5 N: 389] (1376)
  • [2006-12-07 11:59]

Speaking portrait has been drawn in this frame in a warm composition. Well taken image with fine details. Well done Michael.

Thanks for sharing it.
I have posted a WS with another angle.

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1403 W: 0 N: 1709] (13741)
  • [2007-04-14 15:57]

Very warm and romantic,Michael,you lucky man!
thanks from jan

Very nice moody picture of a lovely young woman. Well done. She has an almost hypnotic look in her eyes that makes you look and look again.

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  • ornis Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 148 W: 20 N: 139] (842)
  • [2007-11-26 13:03]
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Bonjour Michael,
I understand you wanted to post this very personal picture of your wife, because there is a strong presence here, a feeling of softness and, finally, a very feminine portrait. This is probably because of the vertical pose, changing from a classical portrait into a romantic appealing attitude. Isn't it what is called in english "having bedroom eyes"?
Technically it could be better (white balance, sharpness).
Regrads
JM

hi Michael
it' s very good shot. very warm and beautiful. greetings
Kamil

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