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The Breakfast on the train


The Breakfast on the train
Photo Information
Copyright: Jose Adolfo Segura (jafsc) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 504 W: 53 N: 88] (4621)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-12-16
Categories: Daily Life, Food, Transportation, Mood
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-12-24 16:54
Viewed: 476
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
My breakfast on the train to Gaspesie.with this shot I start a serie that I've named :'A Journey in Gaspesie'
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What a very delicous first photo for your series. Good sharpness, focus and colours.
I look forward to seeing the next photo.
Well done.
I hope you have a safe and happy holiday.

Ah, je crois découvrir que cest un train d'anglo_saxons, qui ne mangent pas comme nous :)))).
Pas de petits croissants et de confitures comme les gens normaux :)))
Le sujet du voyage est très interessant, la photo plaisante, je suggererais cependant qu'elle fut prise d'un point de vue plus bas et plus de face au centre (ou sur la ligne perpendiculaire de la nappe au cadre et plus à l'horizontale, ainsi tu aurais un tabasco droit. Sans rire...
Compliments
Jean Michel

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  • jude Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 51 W: 1 N: 10] (447)
  • [2004-12-26 8:04]
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its really a delicious photo you re sharing José...NICE SHARPENESS, brightnerss, contrast..simple and clear...

was the omelette delicoius ?!;-)
thanx for sharing
Jude

Such a fleeting moment that so many cannot remember what they had for breakfast this morning. The existence of the photo itself gives this composition force, and the fact that all looks so appetizing, especially for train food, is all the more rewarding. Beautiful color and great lighting.

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