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Flowertop
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Copyright: Otto Rapp (TheMystic) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 977 W: 30 N: 1436] (5903)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-01-08
Categories: Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Samsung Pro 815
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-01-22 1:38
Viewed: 451
Points: 26
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A nice and relatively warm January day in the Riverbottom, getting a few poses in with my wife Christan.
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color/contrast/curves and border added in ps.

PierreFrigon, Werewolf, Silke, Refugee, shelbeesmom, JohnTulip has marked this note useful
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To daynaken: colours and patternsTheMystic 2 02-17 12:26
To Viking: great PPTheMystic 1 02-05 13:26
To JohnTulip: glad you are betterTheMystic 1 01-29 13:36
To shelbeesmom: pose in -40TheMystic 2 01-23 17:50
To Refugee: threatening and sultryTheMystic 1 01-23 17:04
To Werewolf: in JanuaryTheMystic 1 01-23 01:28
To PierreFrigon: samuraiTheMystic 1 01-22 15:47
To rewshearer: confidence and serenity of ChristanTheMystic 1 01-22 15:41
To ruudblok: switch from auto to manualTheMystic 1 01-22 15:36
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wonderful idea to create the framing like this.
you did a great work on PP to create this.
nice photo too, well done.

Haldian

I like this pose and expression! Excuse me while I ignore your photography for a moment, Otto, and say that the confidence and serenity Christan conveys here is fantastic.
Otto - excellent use of available light, good sharpnes and composition. I'm not gonna pretend that I'm a big fan of your frame, it's very distracting, but ignore that and this shot is proof of the impressive skills you are both developing, photographer and model.
Lovely work!
Rew

I like the frame too
But be aware not many people do
Time starts to switch from automatic to manual mode and improve the DOF
Last warning ;-)

Wow, the look, the dress, the hair, all combines to display the perfect samurai :-)
Beautifully captured.
Pierre

To use the tissue as a frame texture is good! That photo look autumnal... Crazy to see it was taken in January! It have a good style... Nice presence :)

Lovely shot & pose. Really neat framing.

Lovely pose by Christan, a combination of threatening and sultry. Lovely colour and light and very artistic framework. Well done Otto and TFS,
David

Many thanks for your comment on ‘Wildlife of Tasmania’

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2846 W: 263 N: 5948] (23590)
  • [2007-01-24 8:05]

A wonderful idea to use the pattern in her clothes for the frame!
I love the POV, colours and details
TFS
Silke
:) spelling errors fixed :)

Very nice shot of the Ice Princess, "Woman who can pose in -40C*"...HAHAHA! Very nice pp work, lovely model!
B-)
linda
pt

Dear Otto, its in photography often about ideas and courage. My friend ..I love what you did here. The pattern in the clothes of Chris you managed to get back in the frame. If you have time again you may email this trick, pleasse. Glad the postcard came and bye for now, also an extra thank you for you know what!TFS
John
ps
Now I can sit behind the computer for 15-20 mins and the screen is not dancing for my eyes.

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  • Josine Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 922 W: 21 N: 652] (4069)
  • [2007-02-04 15:15]

Lovely details and DOF!!! Excellent colours and lighting!TFS and bye bye Otto
Josine

Nice all the way Otto.
I do agree with John. Great PP!!!!
Take Care
Rob

Hi Otto

Una composición perfecta buen trabajo

Nat

Clever idea to carry the pattern of your wifes shirt to the frame, with everything in the BG and the patterns on her shirt it has made the photo a little busy. I would have made the BG more plain. That way your pretty wife doesn't disappear in the all of the colors and patterns. I have tried to do a WS to show you what I meant, it works a little but didn't turn out quite as well as I'd hope it would but it will give you an idea what I meant.
The photo itself is good, the pose is nice, the subject beautiful, good strong clarity and detail.
Dayna

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