Floating Ring

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• rychousmama (228)
• [2007-04-12 1:39]
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Welcome to TL Vince! I really like the point of view used here to get the floating ring at the side of this wooden boardwalk, leading the eye to the background of the shot. So, good perspective and depth achieved. I do feel that there should be a bit more negative space at the left edge since the ring is almost touching the edge, breaking the continuity of the composition. Also leave a little more room at the left to include a bit more of the boardwalk, since it makes the shot interesting. Try reducing the brightness a little bit on the shot as there are parts of the floating ring that are overexposed (the glaring parts). But it really does give the feel of a calm summer day. We need the warm weather over here now, haha. Great shot and I hope to see more of your work!
-Lara

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• Silke (23588)
• [2007-04-13 5:55]

Too cool!
I did know that you were a shutterbug (I had after all seen your camera !!) but we never really got a chance to talk.
Welcome to TL (I figured you'd follow the links and get established quickly).
I love this image -- Good clean lines, excellent PoV, sharp clear details. One or two little niggles (but a good early posting
TFS (Thanks for sharing)
Silke
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