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self shot
Photo Information
Copyright: Sarju Sooch (sarju) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 109 W: 0 N: 68] (492)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-01-01
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/80 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): E y e s, Auto-portrait, Eye's [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-04-15 4:50
Viewed: 1549
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 37
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
New Year Day Shot
Yes I know what you are thinking ...
Here is a portrait of another eye, I know its too simple but there is a catch in this photo.
I took this photo by myself and if you see closely you can clearly see the camera I am holding.

THe only problem I had was that I wanted a lot of light to appear in my pupil so I had to open my pupil much wider than the comfort limits

by the way ... in the pupil you can see the view outside my window ... white stuff is the snow and blue stuff is the sky ...
cheers
Thanks for looking in my eye .. he he.

and yes lastly ... I am sorry I do not know how to use PS so I cannot remove the white flakes near the eye.
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To zenitlady: wow .. nice comments .. thxsarju 1 04-17 12:49
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Hey that's great here... We can see so many things in your eyes.
And all this details all around. It is a two part shot. Inside and all around.
Thanks for sharing what you have in your eye.
Héhéh.
See you.
Denis.

excellent detail and composition. yes there are several eye photos on this site, but this one is exceptionally good. what camera are you using? I can't tell from the reflection.

Interesting view of your eye. I like the details you got of your eyelashes. Good job!

I expected to see you.... not your camera... hehe..
Well done, good idea!!
Thank you!!
Carmem

Wow!! That's a great self portrait!! I can see you there holding the camera and all the background too! Great blue sky by the way!!! I really liked looking into your eye Sarju!!!!
It's a great photo, very sharp with great colours and cretive enough ;-) Well done.
Points tomorrow ok??
Ana

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  • mukesh Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 691 W: 102 N: 435] (4777)
  • [2005-04-16 14:35]

Kmaal ki aankh hai. It seems you had to shed tears to get this :-)) But what a wonderful picture.

Good job!! I love eye makro photos :)

Now that is depth of field! What a great capture! Not only are the eyes the window of the soul, but they are also the window out the window and across the street! Very imaginative, wonderfully clear. Well done!

RIEN QU'A VOIR, ON VOIT BIEN QU'À LA NOIRCEUR ON NE VOIT RIEN...C'EST CLAIR.....(HIHIHI)
Non, blague a part....rarement vu une photo d'oeil si claire et agréable a regarder...
Bravo tres belle réussite....
Claude

i like the presents of your hands in your eye, but i think you should make your skin little bit softer and erase this white flakes on the left side of this photo,
tfs
Marek

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2744 W: 369 N: 2624] (11948)
  • [2005-04-18 16:03]

Well no, not just another eye shot, Sarju. The reflection in the eye makes a difference - especially the lashes, also the way you held the camera and made the pupil appear to be the lens is great. Sharpness is excellent.
The only thing I would have removed are the white things below the corner of your eye - a 1 minute job with a clone tool. Anyway, nice s-portrait. Thanks for sharing (TFS).

We've had some good eye shots on TL, but I think this is one of the best. Excellent sharpness. A view of your eye, and yet another view of your camera, then a view of the background scenery. What more could you ask for. A great handheld self portrait. I only wish I had some points left, but I don't.
This would be a good contribution to the Eye theme Sarju.

exellente macro!
avec un beau details des yeux!
bravo!
bye....tanbinh.

Realy well done with a great sharpness... He yes I can see your camera and your hands... very well done...
Gisèle

Hello Sarju,
I recognize many of your sceneries in your gallery... thanks for your critique too.. I like this photo a lot, I enjoy how the camera lens is the pupil, witty... and very nice, clear. That you do not use photoshop is even more exciting, everything is then original, unkempt, that is excellent! :-)
Sarolta

Great reflection in your eye Sarju. Very well balanced too :)

Take care. Yan

Hi Sarju,
nice shot of your eye ... and great reflections. Cool!
Nino

Great capture, Sunil! I can't believe how well we can see the reflections outside andn of your camera. All you have to do, if you have Photoshop, is to use the clone button on the left. Select the size of brush, then alt/click an area nearby and clone it out. Piece of cake!

Alli

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  • clic Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 758 W: 0 N: 206] (4714)
  • [2005-11-04 13:42]

Bonjour Sarju

VOYEUR!!!

Robert Deschênes

Hi Sarju, interesting, but too naturalistic and too close...

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