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Wax pencils IV


Wax pencils IV
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Copyright: Diane Fradette (Kiwis) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1583 W: 0 N: 172] (12185)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-02-10
Categories: Experimental
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/8 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-02-12 4:42
Viewed: 350
Points: 41
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
Hello all,
I miss a little time but It will not be always like that:)
Have a good day!
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Hi Diane,
This is absolutley creativ stuff, great idea and great composition.
I love the way you got that dark BG for the rainbow colours presented by the waxes.
Very well done.
TFS & Cheers

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  • WMcK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 747 W: 11 N: 1599] (6213)
  • [2008-02-12 4:50]

Welcome back Diane and it is great to see so many colours. You have used a super DOF on this one , the ends of each crayon show so clearly. I like how you draw the eye off into the back of the image. Bravo Mon Ami.

Amitiés sincères
Wanda

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4083 W: 209 N: 3546] (26917)
  • [2008-02-12 5:21]

Hi Diane

Superb colour & repetition of the pens, with a nice shallow dof, & marvellius graphism. Well done!

Hi Diane,
A nicely composed image with great colours, like a rainbow.TFS
Selahattin E

a very good composition diana, but perhaps due to low light, the sharpness and clarity is not 100% present. thanks for sharing.

Hi Diane,
very nice composition, good idea for image,
interestig colours, everythig is ok...but light is very low and you can have a better fokus.

But I visit you first time, and one point for image, one point for first visit :)!!

Have a nice day!

Igor

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 990 W: 51 N: 640] (10545)
  • [2008-02-12 6:49]

Hi Diane,
again beautiful compo.Beautiful harmony of the colours.TFS.Necla.

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2094 W: 379 N: 2059] (22018)
  • [2008-02-12 6:58]

Merhaba myfriend Diane..
nice shot and superb colors and detail...bravo...
selamlar

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 515 W: 34 N: 44] (5758)
  • [2008-02-12 7:43]

Dear Diane,
this radiating composition is very interesting.
these colors are like breaking out of these heart.
Taro Okamoto(Japanese modern artist) once said "art is explosion" and his words seem to fit this your shot.
thank you,
Akihisa

Hi Diane,
Lovely wax pencils are very sharpnes...
Nice colours and good compo. Tfs.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

Coucou Diane
bien joie composition de crayons
j'aime les couleurs éclatantes
bonne dsposition
et beaux détails
amitiés

jojo

Bonsoir Diane,
Belle composition et jolies couleurs, belle présentation et détails, très bien fait,
Michel
Merci beaucoup pour les beaux commentaires sur ma photo: 400 Post..

Nice colourfull view Diane
and a little I agree with hamed31568.. it can be a little sharper
Don't work to hard :-) we all slow down in TL from time to time
Amicalement
John

Hi Diane,
Lovely composition and pastel pens.
Very beautiful colours and idea.
Well done my friend.TFS.
Greetings
H.Ayhan

Dear Diane! Amazing paint crown. Wonderful colors. Fantastic idea, fantastic effect.
Good capture.
Cheers!

Hello Diane,
Nice and simple subject.
Good colors.
I think there is a bit noise (could have been removed with NeatImage). TFS
Vandana

Hi Diane:
The colours are super herewith crisp focus, the black BG brings everything out even more. I like the way the tips of the crayons are pointing at me giving it an interesting dynamic..... your best crayon photo.. well done Diane.....Roman:0)

Hi Diane, splendid colorful composition with great sharpness, very well done, have a good week end, ciao Silvio

coucou Diane
jolie présentation, une belle idée
bravo à toi

Bonsoir Diane :o)

J'aime beaucoup l'idée que tu as eue. Une vraie palette de jolies couleurs pour la Reine des couleurs (comme me surnomme Silvio ;o). Belle perspective.
Ca manque cependant d'un peu de contrastes et de netteté.
Bisous
Marylou

Hi Diane,
A very nice and clear shot,
I like the BG and colours of the photo,
nicely focused,
Cheers!!
TFS....

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