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More Than Just a Gardener


More Than Just a Gardener
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Copyright: Silke Force (Silke) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3366 W: 284 N: 6425] (23856)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-13
Categories: Daily Life, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D-70s, Sigma 18-200 mm (F3.5-6.3), Sigma UV 62 mm
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/40 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-07-19 5:52
Viewed: 347
Points: 58
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is a change for me, I know. I rarely do people, but this gentleman agreed to pose for me when I visited his garden last weekend.

David Tomlinson is a landscape architect and has turned his property, which he calls Merlin’s Hollow, into a series of gardens within a garden. Three times a year he opens his gates to the public for just a few hours so we can enjoy his private little escape with him and his wife.

Tech: Taken (handheld) and adjusted in raw, converted to jpg, cropped from the original vertical/portrait style to the horizontal/landscape style, resized, sharpened, framed and signed

Thanks for looking and for all your critiques, workshops and suggestions. Have a healthy, happy, and safe weekend.

shelbeesmom, lilimih33, machinelove, chrisJ, Royaldevon, dareco, juyona, c_rapp, Urfaust, Janone, WMcK, Hendrika, Emma, trekks, jan515, Beger, perryhooter, Refugee has marked this note useful
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You did a fantastic job on this shot Silke. Very natural, love the pose, the tilt of the head is nice! The BG is so complimentary to this, the yellow flowers to the right really add to the shot and I really like the bit of blue in front! The backdrop is excellent for this! Outstanding work, I know he will be pleased with this! The tones in his face are really nice and natural! I really do love this closer crop! It’s my mantra these days… closer…closer….
B-)
linda

Hello Silke,
Great Portrait, you can see life in that mans eyes.
Good lighting and POV,
right on the button.
Best Wishes.
MikeD

Hello Silke!
Perfect this portrait with excellent detail and clarity and wonderful colours!
Excellent done, again!
Best regards!
Lili

Really great natural light here Silke.
The colors and natural and perfect for this shot.
Excellent focus and composition.
Great portrait.
- Vincent

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4187 W: 222 N: 3828] (28073)
  • [2008-07-19 7:37]

Hi Silke

A superb portrait, with excellent colour, lighting and sharpness. No glare off the glasses either. Tfs!

You are very brave, Silke.
Portraits are not easy and you often find yourself 'messing' with them pp to get that effect you see in magazines!
This is lovely.
It is natural, with a direct gaze,(he doesn't appear to be showing signs of embarrassment which often happens with people unaccustomed to posing in front of a camera), perfectly cropped, the skin tones are good, it is sharp and with the right dof.
What more could one ask for?
He'll be employing you to do a photographic slot next time the garden is open.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

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  • ttreen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1576 W: 118 N: 3599] (14411)
  • [2008-07-19 8:10]

Hello Silke
I know just how you feel! I also find portraits difficult.. But I really think you nailed this one perfect.. He look very sweet.. Oh I'd love to sit with him and talk garden!

Tricia

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  • Mitra Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1452 W: 75 N: 816] (7240)
  • [2008-07-19 9:09]

Perfect portrait with excellent detail, clarity and wonderful colours. Excellent done.
Mitra

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1140 W: 15 N: 597] (10227)
  • [2008-07-19 9:32]

Such a nice portrait of this very interesting looking man. I like the tilt of his head and the expression. The lighting and details are excellent. Have a great day!

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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2459 W: 0 N: 864] (13162)
  • [2008-07-19 16:05]

Hola Silke,
interesante retrato,
con buen pose y efectivo foco...
saludos amiga.

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  • c_rapp Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1024 W: 17 N: 1189] (6618)
  • [2008-07-19 18:21]

wonderful looking character great pov nicely captured. Great details and those eyes just grab your attention. TFS and you should try more portraits you did very well here. TFS
Christan

ciao amica mia.. how r u?.. i hope u are really fine!! ;))
the story is great.. and it is as i could read it on his face!! excellent expression captured.. with details.. and something really original and unic in his eyes!! wonderful and effective.. many thanks Silke
ciao Marco

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3345 W: 86 N: 2709] (17909)
  • [2008-07-20 2:41]

Perfect close up potrait.
A man with 'character'
Very well captured, Silke.
Jan

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1683 W: 0 N: 1] (10965)
  • [2008-07-20 3:39]

Hi Silke
This is a very fair and karacterestic portrait.
Gr Jos

Hi Silke,
Great portrait! Perefct sharp and his glance is priceless. The crop and composition all very well balalnced creating a wonderful image. One of the better portraits here on TL.
Hans

Bonjour Silke,
Très joli portrai, ce monsieur me fait plutôt penser à un artiste peintre, remarque, mettre des couleurs en plantant des fleurs c'est de l'art au quotidien!
Merci c'est charmant
Amitiés
Odile:)

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  • WMcK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 731 W: 8 N: 1663] (6414)
  • [2008-07-20 4:30]

I really like how you have made this so very natural Silke. The crop is perfect and the handling of the light very well done. I like his great eyes and how you have captured the character there, even with glasses on. Really like it.
Warm Regards
Wanda

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  • zms Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 271 W: 0 N: 41] (2330)
  • [2008-07-20 5:48]

Hello Silke,
What an outstanding shot. Wonderful.
I thank you for the comment on Amalia
because I did it I was speechless on much more.
I admire very much your work .
Friendly Greetings
Rosa

Looking at this portrait I think you should do more of them, I also thought that after seeings Bev's picture.
For me this one is perfect, details, DOF, crop, no, no suggestions for you I''m afraid.

TFS
Els

Ahhhhhh isn't change a wonderful thing, especially if it results in this kind of quality. Colors look spot on. Maybe this will be a whole new direction for you?

Bravo!!!
(I much prefer your version of your gardner)

Dan

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  • Emma Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1525 W: 7 N: 1610] (8932)
  • [2008-07-20 7:28]

Outstandig portrait Silke,Natural colours,pose and excellentfocus.
My compliment.
Have good week.
Eva

hi Silke

A fine portrait and informative note. Not very often we see architect with a hat on and become a gardener :) Very good light control. tfs

bill

I like my gardeners to show more character, so I've given him some. I do like the glint in his eye though. Maybe he's got a spade in his hand ;-) See workshop.
Graham

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2518 W: 48 N: 2993] (14124)
  • [2008-07-20 11:48]

Hello Silke,
everything very well visible, beautiful you made, please it me well. Very good sharpness and excellent colors, beautifully. Congratulate.
Thanks and beautiful ones of greetings.
Janusz

Hiya Silke

Well my dear friend, for someone who doe not do portraits... well girl you could have fooled me because this is superb. Excellent lighting and good eye contact even with his glasses you have captured the light. Perfect compo and I love the way the hat lines the frame.

TFS kind regards Helen

A very nice portrait of a typical garden man. Nicely done.

Best wishes,
Achim

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3184 W: 224 N: 6865] (27221)
  • [2008-07-21 1:51]

So you're branching out into portraits, Silke?
Well composed with a good crop. Colours and skin tones look very natural. . . You have focused well on him
Bravo
Janice

Ciao Silke, splendid portrait with great expression, very well done, ciao Silvio

Oops !

Just visited Linda , and i saw your link (^_*), therefore a quick late night visit. This one is just perfect Linda . You should post more portraits . Amazing details and sharpness,. The tilted head works very well also. Gorgeous blue eyes this gentleman has.

Just a minor point , I might have reproduced the greens over the blue area or change a bit the tint. I finfit slightly distractive.

But anyway , you nailed is portrait . Well done !
Cheers!
Robert

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3046 W: 568 N: 3412] (15123)
  • [2008-07-21 9:27]

Hi Silke,
Amazing portrait! The personality of this man passes in his glance and attitude. A little shy, very wise, and certain
scepticism about the interest to take his portrait?
The eye contact is strong and you rendered the colors with a good natural! Very sharp photo! You must do portrait more often! Bravo! Annie

:) Later!

Excellent crop Silke. Good colour and detail in your subject and a lovely background. If I did have one nitpick it would be that patch of blue. A lovely portrait,
David

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3336 W: 684 N: 1925] (16099)
  • [2008-07-22 2:01]

Wonderful natural portrait !

thanks,
v

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