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• GreenBaron (48794)
• [2009-10-12 22:57]
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Hi Wayne,
A fine portrait with good brightness, contrast and natural skin colours. I'm not sure about the pose though, a pity you didn't rotate the camera 90 degrees to a landscape format, the green conifer doesn't add much to the picture (portrait) secondly the arm is cut and I wish to see the elbow. Anyway a portrait with some remarks, but also with the potential to become a real good one!
Hans

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• WhiteKnight (7519)
• [2009-10-12 23:24]
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Hello wayne - I like the clarity and sharpness of this shot but it still gives a dreamy look to it... The diffused light under the trees is excellent.

I agree with Hans about her arm looking a little awkward but kudos for such a nice portrait.

David

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• andateaffan (312)
• [2009-10-13 1:39]
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si credo anch'io che ci siano diversi errori in questa foto e non capisco il giudizio positivo di alcuni.
Le braccia tagliate e la posizzione verticale non rendono bene il soggetto
quei due rami verdi a destra andavano cancellati
provo a fare un ws

Anda

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• riverfriends (6972)
• [2009-10-13 3:58]
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Hi Wayne:
A very interesting look that you have captured in the eyes of this young lady...the idea of softer look and bright eyes make it look very appealing!!!
Great work!
David