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• clix_stuff (2303)
• [2005-07-19 11:20]

Hey the expression on her face is wonderful. What big eyes she has. She is genuinely bewildered with something. Really like this one ..TFS.
Know its tough but there is a shadow of her nose just take care of the light ..

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• jemmadalley (186)
• [2005-07-19 11:37]

What a lovely portrait. Her eye's are so big and beautiful. I'd love this picture on my wall in black and white. Maybe you could adjust the shadow from her nose?

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• shel (178)
• [2005-07-19 13:31]

Hi Sarolta.
This is a lovely portrait, especially as it seems to have been a chance encounter so little if any preparation was probably possible.
The comment about the shadow of the nose is valid and is something you should always be on the lookout for (to avoid :).
Also, whilst it is fine to crop off the top of a subject's head, it does look much better if the lower part of the face is complete...that is, if the chin is NOT cropped.
But again, this is a delightful photograph.
regards,
Sheldon (shel)

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• tournesol (12862)
• [2005-07-19 14:30]

Nice tight crop, showing very well her lovely eyes. I like the fact that it is very candid. Good job!

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• drymd29 (7621)
• [2005-07-19 15:00]

I wouldn't have seen a shadow on her nose in 100 years! But that's me; I have to learn a few things.
I'm full of admiration for this picture; it is very alive and spontaneous.
A favorite!
Thanks
Sarolta

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• Saiz (0)
• [2005-07-19 15:41]

Deux yeux grand comme le monde et qui croque la vie avec insouciance …
Bravo pour ce portrait tout en douceur.
Antonio

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• Tintin (1982)
• [2005-07-19 20:06]

What beautiful bright eyes this little girl has and you have captured it perfectly. It would have been nice to get her full chin but again I also like the tight crop that focus our attention on her eyes. Great work!

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• kolesn (1012)
• [2005-07-20 10:44]

Ask the parents of the kid for a permission to sell this picture to some magazine and earn a lot :)
Perfect DOF, 100 per cent natural child's mood. Congrats!!

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• rghattam (980)
• [2005-07-21 3:49]

Her eyes and smile are hypnotizing the way that you've captured her here. The light and the detail is perfect. The little shadow of her nose on the right side is a little minus, but hey who cares it's a great portrait. Beautiful and so cute little girl. TFS.

Ravi.

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• NatIsrael (0)
• [2005-07-24 14:11]

This is a lovely little girl, indeed. I can see why you wer so enchanted.
Thanks for paying a visit to my mother (with the beautiful jacket, on a boat...).
Regards,
Natacha

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• wayne (0)
• [2005-07-26 16:44]

great portrait! big beautiful eyes!

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• Elfik (2428)
• [2005-08-10 15:14]

Beautiful portrait, I love it!!!

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• bfly (1540)
• [2006-01-27 8:51]

:)) I came here from your 200th picture..
she is lovely..and looks like my son :)..I call my son "soda eyes"..eyes always moving and shining in an effervescent mood :)..
hugs
fussy :)