Mum's Garden

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• puffy (16541)
• [2005-10-07 17:49]
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Hi Jessica, is a good shot... Good colours, composition and lighting, but just a bit of advice, I think your focus point is on thetiny green leave underneat the flower, maybe focus more on the flower itself will make the shot much better, I will also remove the orage leaves at the bottom of the left hand side, it just distracting as it is also in the focus, it just my view. :) hope you don't mind.

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• Janice (26112)
• [2005-10-08 6:02]
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Hi Jessica, wow, a new camera. How's it going now? (3 weeks since you posted this photo)
A tip for a new camera - Practice and Practice more and more. So I hope you are getting lots of practice!!
I like your bright flower here, the colours are good. Well done.

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• monks (206)
• [2005-10-09 5:10]

Hi Jessica
i like it, fire colours.
I like the green in the background.Your mum must have beautiful colourful flower in her garden.
good job
Monika

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• LuciG (8642)
• [2005-10-25 9:31]

HI JESSICA!
this is such a beautiful flower. The colors are amazing, this is an excellent macro shot. The background with deep colors really emphasizes the beauty of it all!
Congratulations!
Luci

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• jacojvr (4027)
• [2005-12-19 3:36]

Great macro photo. colours are stunning,
jaco