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Cry with the rain


Cry with the rain
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Copyright: Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona (drackness) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 868 W: 60 N: 615] (3722)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-05-08
Categories: Macro
Camera: FujiFilm FinePix Z1
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-05-09 18:31
Viewed: 498
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
The lights extinguished... everything was so dark that you could not perceive to a person beyond two meters... the light of the screen illuminated partially that room of cinema and your breathing began to be shaken... you really shook... you were shaking and trying to remember when was the last time that you felt that sensation being with somebody... you perceive the aroma of its skin rather close and begin to kiss its face... God, she is beautiful... their eyes catch and you want to you to arrive at those prohibited lips that have been reason for sleeplessness the last nights... but you halfway stop... the film that this projecting loses interest (if it is that it had it)... Games... games and more games... she know the power that she has on your person and you enjoy... you cannot do nothing... One... two or three tears special taxes in the dark without she perceives them... you do not know if the these happy or sad... dry tears when time to approach the end... you do not want that she knows that you were spilling ago of weeping... salts of the room with her and you take leave after minutes... rain begins to bathe your face... to end of accounts is better, the weeping that at this point is icnontrolable is confused with the drops that fall of the sky... you walk under rain by an indefinite time...

Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona

"rain crosses my face... my tears the sky..."
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  • woody Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 181 W: 61 N: 140] (710)
  • [2007-05-09 18:37]

Hi Luis,
This is a nice composition with very intense tones (thanks to your note). I really such pictures as they would remain simple in compo yet have such a high quality of richness to it that cant really be explained in words. Well done.
Regards,
Varun

Jajaj. Hola Drackness!! acabo de subir una foto de mi hermano (y tu amigo) Mauro (que le escapa al agua). Entre los 2 no hacen uno!! ;) Un saludo grande,
Muy buena la foto, pero se puede agregarle más dramatismo con PS!
Patricio.-

Andaba por la galería, y ahí estabas, amigo. Qué precio tiene, a veces, la poesía. QUé mal se pasa.
Pero, merece la pena, no es cierto? Otra gran instantánea.
Un saludo.

Hola Luis,
lovely photo and poem, as always.

Kindly regards,
Ioana

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  • valari Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 964 W: 102 N: 395] (4105)
  • [2007-05-15 11:05]

Hi,Luis,I worry about,but hope one day you will post here one so coloring and smiling image....
hug,val

Hola Fer,tànto tiempo sin saber de ti,ni demi,ni de nadie.
Me gustò mucho èsta foto,tiene la gama tonal adecuada de la noche y me gùsta tambièn tu pose.
Imagino que devìas de tener un poco de frio,pero bueno,aveces hay que hacer algùnos sacrificios para obtener una buena toma.
Linda composiciòn.
Bueno...aver si un dìa de èstos me entero que màs has hecho en èste tiempo amiguillo.
Nos vemos y suerte :)

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1511 W: 23 N: 0] (11870)
  • [2007-08-29 2:51]

Hola
Very nice portrait...Nice composition and nice model...

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