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Jessy's back


Jessy's back
Photo Information
Copyright: Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona (drackness) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 868 W: 60 N: 615] (3722)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-05-12
Categories: Macro
Camera: FujiFilm FinePix Z1
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-07-17 21:35
Viewed: 611
Points: 13
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
Model: Jessica
Date: 12/05/2007
Camera: Fuji FinePix Z1
Photographer: Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona

Comming soon back
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nice composition and use of colour
give some dark atmosphere
like the framing too
tfs
M

Hi Luis
Well, good to see you posting again - good sharpness, colour, composition in this shot. Jessy is well placed in the frame. The exposure is a little too strong on her face, a faster shutter speed would be useful here ...

... Is she making a rude sign with her hand?

Rew

Hi Luis,
So y'r back. Glad to see you again. Great portrait of Jesse (she dirty mind :-)
Fine composition with the lush green in front of her.
TFS
Hans

:) Later...

Cuánto me alegro de verte por aquí, amigo.
Me ha gustado esta foto que nos regalas, con una composición perfecta, y unos estupendos colores.
Un fuerte abrazo.

saludos Fer


bella composición bien lograda la idea te felicito


Nat

there's OE on her face, the positioning of the fingers are distracting. There are tiny distractions also on the lower center of the picture, the bottom of a cellphone and perhaps a packet of cigarette. The focus is not on the model but elsewhere. my two cents.

HOLA!!!, bienvenido che!.
Muy buena la foto!. Qué es toda esa tecnología en medio de la vegetaCIÓN?.
Saludos!

Mauro

perfect i liked....

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