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The woman of my life (poem)


The woman of my life (poem)
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Copyright: Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona (drackness) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 868 W: 60 N: 615] (3722)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-10-14
Categories: Macro
Camera: FujiFilm FinePix Z1
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-03-12 4:53
Viewed: 463
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Spanish]
The woman of my life is
that night after night hopes to me anxious
after the old threshold of the door;
she is the one that cures my wounds
and dry my continuous weeping
with its caresses nondemanded;
she is the one that when seeing me to arrive at house
nondoubt in saluting to me,
leaves to receive to me watches a moment to me and soon it embraces to me;
she is the woman who after thousand failures
always this there raising to me
offering his always ready arms to me;
she is that woman who always knows that to say
at any moment, although it almost always
express with silence his to feel;
woman without body nor forms human
that tends to awake next to me
and who always to all sides accompanies to me;
faithful companion and without resentments
that that knows after all always
I will return after a new failure of loves;
woman... woman... woman...
Faithful and submissive woman
who you always give me the whole soul
to me with a warm smile;
woman... woman... woman...
Loving perfect and arranged to everything
always to remove to me from the
bottom when I am in the mud;
woman... woman... woman...
my friend without age nor times
above I know you from always and
from always you soul with my soul walks...
Perhaps the woman of my life is not perfect,
and fear to some produces to them...
Perhaps the woman of my life is not beautiful,
and in public she is never brilliant...
The woman of my life has a as common name
as she is it she...
The woman of my life Solitude is called,
and I know from the night that
when your silhouette abandonment my bed...

Luis Fernando Ortega Carmona http://www.ferortega.com/fotografias.htm

"the solitude is the absence of your company in my melancholies"
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  • cokke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 433 W: 109 N: 909] (4355)
  • [2007-03-14 15:00]

vecino me gusta la foto, solo que te pierdes en la foto, falto un poco de trabajo de composición ...

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