Jessy

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• rychousmama (228)
• [2007-05-06 19:50]
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Cool shot! I like the pose and look of the model along with the somewhat urban background. I do thing the green trees and buildings in the background are slightly distracting though. But the vertical framing and cropping, along with the diagonal lines of the floor tiles lead the viewer's eye to the main subject and give a sense of perspective and depth. The reflections in her sunglasses make this shot full of character. I might recommend having her step into a more lit or sunny area, since there's shadow enveloping her torso and legs, making the subject obscured and losing some of the tonalities on her. I do love that text of her name at the bottom corner, which adds to the edgy, cheeky feel. I am posting a workshop of this, hope you like it!
-Lara

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• mburraco (1608)
• [2007-05-06 20:46]

Me encantó esta foto!- Buen look, y esos anteojos re parafernales!.
Buena actitud, y que par de botas!.
Saludos a todos por allá!.

MAuro

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• gavindya (200)
• [2007-05-07 0:38]

nice pose Jessy :)
tfs
Haldian